Hey! Forever here with a review!!
The title caught my attention and I wanted to know what the story had to tell about being caged. So here I am to give you a review.
This was an interesting story but I do have to confess the fact that I was utterly confused about the main character. Like what is the main character? Was it a human being or some other animal? Like maybe there are similarities between the feelings of being caged between a human being and the other animals but for the sake of imagination, I think it's kind of important to know who we are really talking about.
Anyway, from what I understand, it was a dog(for the word bark in the end), so I will review the whole thing from that perspective. I really don't understand one thing—how was the dog able to breathe? Like fron what I understood, the total box was covered with glass and if so, it really sounds quite impossible to breathe. Maybe there were a few spaces here and there... Nevertheless, it's at least going to be a bit problematic to breathe and I think it's worth mentioning.
I have to confess the fact that the dog was in a pathetic condition. Talking about the plot, I guess a dog was brought from somewhere and was put inside a cage and was being displayed for sale in a shop. Then a woman came and bought it. There are two other things which I want to mention:
What was the dog's previous condition? I mean where it was in the initial place. On the street or somewhere else? Next, the condition of the other dogs when it was being taken away. When the story talks about being caged and the miserable feeling due to that, I guess it wouldn't hurt if you add the feelings and the sad faces of the other dogs when this dog was being taken away.
Overall, it was a great story! I loved how you decided to portray the theme if being freed from being caged but the dog didn't realize that it wasn't completely free.
Keep Writing!!
~Forever
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