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Re: A Question
Heya! I am going to review this! This would be my 10TH review, yeah!! :D So, I go stanza to stanza. First Stanza: I think this "And dance like golden ...
May 26, 2013 -
Re: Villanelle Sounds so like Villain
Hey, I like to go from stanza to stanza! I see you've gotten some reviews but I can't resist poetry! First Stanza: Okay so I take the stanza and I ...
May 26, 2013 -
Re: Stained
Hey! So team blue to the rescue!! It seems like you really want help for this and that is fantastic!! I really like reviewing poetry and I will do my ...
May 26, 2013 -
Re: deleate
Hey! It looks like you need a buddy to help you with your editing and such...well, this is the link for them :) They can partner up with you and ...
May 26, 2013 -
Re: you...
Heya! Panda, yay, I love Panda's! Here is some formatting tips: "You say you're (don't forget the apostrophe! Or just say "you are") cool, But you're not. You call me ...
May 26, 2013 -
Re: Cyclical
Hey! Your fellow blue member here to scope out your cool poetry! So I go from stanza to stanza, and as I can see this has no stanzas (which is ...
May 26, 2013 -
Re: Moving on
Hey! Team blue at your service! When I review I go from Stanza to Stanza: First Stanza: I like the words you've used here, simple but connecting. I do have ...
May 26, 2013 -
Re: love like summer
Hey! I loooove reviewing poems! I got from Stanza to Stanza. First Stanza: First a foremost, your formatting is amazing! I really like it, and I have only one serious ...
May 26, 2013 -
Re: Colors
Hey! Another review here I come! So, I like to go from stanza to stanza: First Stanza: First and foremost is the formatting, and I have often told people how ...
May 26, 2013 -
Re: Falling away
Hey! You're my first review on review day! So, since this is a short story, and since Dayle did not really get a part in this, (why not? Could Dayle ...
May 26, 2013 -
Re: A Dandelion and a Meadow
Hey!! I like to review from stanza to stanza whenever I review poems that have them, so here I go! First Stanza: I really like this, I always like the ...
May 25, 2013 -
Re: Letters from War
I like to break things down so they go from scene to scene. Also my changes usually are bolder. SCENE 1 Travelers intending to embark on the Atlantic voyage are ...
May 16, 2013 -
Re: The Winds Of Change.
This. Is. Beautiful. :) It really is, and I have no problem with some of the way you put it, because I don't always arrange things the "proper" way when ...
May 13, 2013 -
Re: choices
HI! This is really simple and cute. The most interesting thing about it which drew me here is the fact that it has two connections to my work(s). The first ...
May 13, 2013 -
Re: Boom
Hey! I read this a while back and never got to give you a good review! So here I am attempting to. I really liked it when I read it, ...
Jul 28, 2013
