SilverBerry

Hey Silverberry here for a review! First of all I'd like to say I'm impressed that you managed to keep your meaning and keep the poem moving forward even though ...

Hey friend! Silverberry here for a review! Considering I don't normally review poems, this one caught my eye and I did end up liking it! I like the dramatic tone ...

Hey, silverberry here! Great story! Overall, I like your writing style, for it's casual, yet offers interesting metaphors and enough details that really set the scene! I like the character ...

Hey Silverberry here for a review! I love poems that rhyme, and I think your descriptions and metaphors were very impressive, and I really liked the humor in this. There ...

Hey, Silverberry here! Really great short story! I enjoy how it ended the most, for you left me curious, and suspenseful endings are always interesting. I like the meaning, and ...

Hi! Love the poem, love the realism in it and the meaning behind the wonderful descriptions and metaphors. "Rest means that something Is terribly wrong" -I love this sentence because ...

Heyo! Silverberry here, and although I don't know how helpful I'll be in a poem that doesn't rhyme, I'll try my best to review! Okay right off the bat I'd ...

Heyo! As you know, I don't normally review poems that don't rhyme, but I really loved this one so I thought I'd make an exception. The first and second line ...

Hello, Silverberry here to review! I'm reading this as I review so my personal thoughts will be at the end. "She arrived with her young daughter. Most of us suspected ...

Hello! Silverberry here for another review! And, as always, I'm reviewing this as I write so personal thoughts will be at the end. "...I wanted, no, needed you. I still ...

Hi, Silverberry here for a review! I must say, I really like the poem! My favorite poems are poems that rhyme and I love all things autumn, so this was ...

Hello, Silver here! As with the other chapters, I'm reading this as I review so my personal thoughts will be at the end! First off, “If you really liked me, ...

Heyo! Silverberry here for a VERY LATE REVIEW. I read the last chapter and reviewed it, but it seems I postponed reviewing the second chapter for a long time. Whoops. ...

Hi! Silverberry here! I love this poem so much, how you structured it and made it in the shape of a dragon and all your wonderful rhymes. Incredible! I'm just ...

Hi! Silverberry here for a review! I must say, I wasn't really sure what I was expecting with this poem, and though it was a bit silly it was also ...