SilentRain

Who are you?Who am I?All around methere is writingwriting on the wallswalls that I seeday in and day outall around methere is writingwriting on my wallsWhy am I here?Why am ...

There is a door before meleft slightly ajar,through the crackI see the other side.Home awaits me from behind this open door.The passageway is open,but not enough for me to pass.I ...

I've kinda had this sitting around waiting to be finished for a while and just finished it, so, tell me what you dreams of peaceful slumberyou're floating in and outof ...

This is the original... topic68408.html Which one is better?? Midnight wondersdeep within a dream.Fading in, fading out,but always nestled against a dream.Dreams of peace.Of first loves bliss,softly s

I'm still working on this but I'm stuck... Tell me what you think of it so lips are chappedred and swollenbut I don’t carelets keep goingI don’t want to stopenchanted ...

Okay, so, I just wrote this, it is 12:07, I wrote it in about 7-8-9 minutes, and I didn't edit it at all... So please, tell me what you think!I ...

Okay, this is an edited version, before you read this chick the link and read the origanal, tell me with is bette and if it improved... topic68976.htmlMy lips are chappedred ...

Ok, so, I just wrote this. It is like, the first poem I've written in about a month... I'm not sure about the title or the end, so please tell ...

Just wrote this, only edited a little, I think its kinda long, but Im not sure if thats good or bad... Tell me what you think!They're screaming wordsthat just wont ...

This has just been sitting arounf waiting to be fineshed for awhile, not to sure I like how it came out, any suggestions??This ones for the kids,that never had a ...

Well, this just came completly out of the blue... I LOVE IT!!! What do you think??? Didn't edit at all, wrote it in like, 10 mins...Hello my rainbow,after a sunshine,from ...

Spoiler! : So, this is my first atempt at Narrative Poetry... I'm not sure how it is but, I like it... I don't really like the ending, but that might ...

So, this is an EXTREMELY edited version of this poem, the spoiler at the bottom is the original post. Dry spell, dry spell,go away!Don’t come back,another day!You tease me with ...

Wrote this really late last night, edited a little today. What do you think??You probably don’t remember me,but I remember you.I was your first friend;The one you looked towhen you ...

So, for all thoughs people that hate sad "emo" poems, this isn't one, just keep reading, you'll see. Just wrote this, not sure about the ending. What do you think??Sometimes,life ...

So, I had the first stanza just sitting around for a really long time. I looked at it and just started typing, trying to get something out. I ended up ...

So, this is my first attemp at writing a humorous poem... I know that limerick are funny poems, so, I wrote one of those...I don't really know how funny this ...

Wrote this in like, three minutes. I edited it a little, but not much... What do you thing???Dear Jane,Everyday, you die a thousand times,when I realize,for the millionth time,that when ...

You know,I gazed at the cloudsand just thought-A cloud never look at another,and says “Your too fat!” And then drifts away.No, the clouds all float togethermoving with the wind. If ...

I see her face in the mistrising from the splash of the waves.Its her, a memory from a not so distant past,she’s dancing in the waves, begging meto come into ...

The first time I saw him,I was the new girl,shy and quiet, sitting aloneat a table in the library.He must have saw me,and saw something he liked,because he came overand ...

So i just wrote this and did very little editing... Rain drops fall outside my open windowtheir pitter patter a lovely songI love the rain as it soaks the groundleaving ...

I’ll stay up all night,And wait for your call;I’ll count the stars on the ceiling,And wait for one to fall.I’ll catch it in my hands,And save in a jar,For when ...

So I really didn't rewlly do any editing, and I really don't know if I even like it...Nothing can ever really be the same againnot after you encounter the remedy ...

Has my love left me?Moved on to more promising people?Found a new love to hold her hand?I feel so alone,Another day done by,Without the percence of my love,Without her arms ...

There’s a cute little girlin a light blue tee,full of bright smiles,looks as happy as can be.But look a little closer,deep within her eyes,what do you see there,beneath all the ...

The rain falls down,its acid sorrows,burning through my skin,and leaving holes in my soul.The weather must have been an omen,telling us to be ready for disaster.The Wind whispered warnings to ...

Okay, so I wrote this in a five min rant and I'm not sure about how it is, whether it is good or not, so any suggestions and comments would ...

A little poem I wrote in about 10 minutes, in needs work, any suggestions??I feel as if life passes me byEach and everyday Because each and every dayI linger idly ...