Sigyn

Hi there! Great poem, it's a really interesting concept and drew me in from when I began reading it. The flow of your poem is coherent and your wording is ...

Hi there! First off great poem, I can really imagine the desert around me. The isolation of the area and the vast space you create in the poem is truly ...

Hi there! Great poem, really enjoyed the vivid imagery created and the use of the cherry tree. The dead, dying and the ones just born show an interesting connection drawing ...

Hi there! Your poem has such vivid imagery and really draws me into the world you created. The need to go away, to find peace because of how hard you ...

Hi! I enjoyed your poem very much and the rhyming in the poem helps to make it flow. Some of the longer sentences do disturb the pattern such as line ...

Hi! I can relate to this poem so much, it's short, it's sweet and I enjoyed it very much. It you wrote this when you had writer's block I would ...

Hi Felistia, Your poem has a very good form and was very engaging. The repitition of "Beware, beware the Shadow stalker" drew me into the poem to discover what is ...

I am a tiny bit speechless but not enough to praise the amount of goodness this poem is. The softness of the poem even just having no captials really make ...

Hi, first off loved your poem and personfication of the jack-o-latern/scarecrow. I enjoyed the conversation aspect of the poem between the writer and the scarcrow it makes the poem stand ...

First I would like to say kudos for having a map at the beginning, that takes dedication and remind me of other fantasy stories like "Rowan of Rin". So just ...

I really liked the flow of your poem, it had a very good rhythm however I did feel in the fourth stanza the first line was a bit lengthy. The ...

I really enjoyed the poem, the message was very clear what you were trying to point out. Was it meant to be "Help" instead or "Hell" either one works really ...

I enjoyed your poem however I felt you could of explored some more areas more so a deeper connection could be formed with the girl in the poem. Like what ...