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Re: Her Last Dream
As a final thought, this was an okay poem. One thing I wasn't fond of was how you talked about beauty in the end, because that was mighty predictable. It ...
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Re: Her Last Dream
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Jul 26, 2015
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Re: Plant Life
Hey Markontheworld, First of all thanks to write it. Now it's review time...... This poem is really good. It holds the actual emotion of nature. Your message is really impact-full. ...
Jul 26, 2015 -
Re: Love in Fear
After reading it I'm compelled for going a review................ Hey Firstly I want to say that your poetry title is too good because it say many more things itself and ...
Feb 22, 2015 -
Re: And Then I Thought
I really enjoyed this poem throughout. This is a funny poem that's why it make me happy when I read it. I like the depth and meaning and the way ...
Feb 22, 2015 -
Re: Untitled
Hello evairo, This is Shubham and it's time to review your poem. Firstly I want to notice why are you not giving any title of this poem. You must give ...
Feb 22, 2015 -
Re: Untitled,. - Chapter 2
Hi iThyPillow, Welcome to Young writers society. This is your first work here so, I want to say that it is not a good way to write a poetry. This ...
Feb 22, 2015 -
Re: fish Swimming over arcs of rainbows
Firstly I want to congrats you because it is your first work over Young Writer Society. I hope it is a great experience for you and you are enjoying to ...
Jan 24, 2015 -
Re: An Apology Letter
Poetry is a way to say many more things with the help of few words or sentences and you done it perfectly. Through this poetry you catch the actual emotion ...
Jan 11, 2015 -
Re: The Scarred Face.
Hello friend This is a good poem of love and redemption between mother and his son. This poem shows a attraction between them. How a son can attached with emotion ...
Oct 16, 2013 -
Re: Relapse
Hey Welcome to the YWS. This is your first poetry,so I want to suggest you this is not good way to write a poetry. You write it as a paragraph ...
May 28, 2013 -
Re: The Girl with the Heart Shaped Glasses
Hello SparkOfDoubt This story shows your spec imagination ability. You just describe the surrounded environment very clearly. You heed every steps and write the actual feeling of his heart. The ...
May 14, 2013 -
Re: Black and Blue
This is really a nice poetry. You try to say much more with the help of these few words. you just arise here a conditional meaning of words. YOU well ...
May 14, 2013 -
Re: Crossfire
Hello This is really a good try to write a suspense romantic story and I enjoy this story but I was shocked somewhere when read this story because romantic moments ...
May 11, 2013
