Sherri

Hey! I don't know how you got your stanza spacing to look like this, but it looks great and the flow is nice. I've found that with most of the ...

Hey! I really love this; your imagery is amazing throughout, which is difficult to maintain, so kudos to you! There are a few grammar errors you might want to looks ...

This is hilarious; you kept the tone so serious till the end, making it even funnier when I remember you're talking about a printer! The only mistake I noticed was ...

Hey Heavymetal! I really like this poem. I mean, I would go ahead and mark it as 18+ because of the f-bomb--that's considered strong language, so it's best to be ...

Hi ChyrsoStemma, Sherri here to review! First of all, welcome to the site and congratulations on your first work. :) With that in mind, I'll be as constructive as I ...

Hi Lonely, Sherri here to review. I... really love this. In fact, it's sort of stuck in my head. *adds to favorites* I can't believe how much I love this. ...

Hi Stripeslife, Sherri here to review you today! Welcome to YWS, first of all; I love your avatar! I really liked this poem, even though it was kind of sad. ...

Hi Diem (can I call you that?). Sherri here to review! First of all, welcome to YWS! I hope you enjoy the site as much as I do. :) This ...

Hi eleutheromania! Sherri here to review your poem :) Welcome to YWS, and... on an off note... do you have a nickname for your username? I have a feeling I'll ...

Hey GeoCha! Sherri here to review your story. Welcome to YWS, by the way :D It's good to see new members! I really liked this--especially the names. I have a ...

Hey AdjiFlex, Sherri here to review you chapter. I haven't read the other chapters yet, but this seemed really good! I like the story and ideas; I was especially intrigued ...

Hi Elfsongs, Sherri here to review you today. :) First of all, welcome to YWS! I really liked this story, even though I haven't read the previous chapter. Aside from ...

Hi Pompadour! Sherri here to review your piece. I have personally never seen a poem set up like this. At first I thought I might get bored (no offense!) but ...

Hi Percybeth, Sherri here to review. Even though I didn't see any errors, and a few people have already reviewed... I couldn't help it! I had to let you know ...

Hi Brunnera! Sherri again :D I loved this chapter, too! The story is still great; I finally have the time to start slowly going backwards so I can catch up ...