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Hi Sarah! I love this poem; it reminds be of an uncontrollable fear of darkness when I was younger. XD The lack of defined stanzas stalled me while reading at ...

Hi there :D I read this quite a few times, actually. I like the simple set-up, direct comparison (unable to compare your lover to all the stars in the sky... ...

Hiya Bassy :D As promised, I am here to review for you! (by the way, this is a lot better than you were letting on XD I love your writing ...

Hey! I haven't read the chapters before this one, but once I realized what the plot was... wow! I really, really loved this! :D You use great word choice, imagery, ...

Hey! This is really, really good; I felt the fear! I don't read pieces that grip me with emotion very often anymore, so it was not only surprising, but refreshing ...

Hiya! :D Well... as you would expect, there isn't much I can do here review-wise. XD But it isn't fair to let your piece wander the Green Room just because ...

Hey! :D This... was really good! I don't know why, but it reminded me of Black Butler (it really shouldn't, but I'm currently obsessed with the show, so it make ...

Hi Therese! :) Yay! We both have a little sister. Only yours writes XD I wish. Anyways, go ahead and tell her that this is really good! The descriptive imagery ...

Hey Unknown :D I'll go ahead and warn you that I haven't read the Prologue, but I think I put together the important pieces. When I have the time, I'll ...

Hi! This is a really good poem; more importantly, there's a good idea behind it. Were you speaking to our society in general, or more to a group of people ...

Hey! This is a great poem :D Especially for a first (mine was in first grade, with the roses are red, violets are blue stuff XD ), this shows good ...

Hey :) This was very good, if a little confusing at first. I had to reread a few times to makes sure I understood correctly, but in the end, I ...

Hey! Welcome to the site :) This was good, if a little confusing at first. Once I reread it, though, it was very beautiful... I actually read it several times ...

Hi! This is great :) I love the imagery you use, even though it made me hungry. Very hungry. I had to stop before I wrote this to go munch ...

Hey Bassy :) The imagery in this poem. Was so amazing! :D I got caught up in it instantly, and couldn't tear my eyes away. It's dark, but fittingly so; ...