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Sherri

  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Teen Fiction Re: Who Knows

    Hey there Vivian! :) I actually really enjoyed this! The length isn't bad at all. You mentioned in the description it was for a comic you were working on? I'm ...

    Jun 7, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Children Of Shadows Chapter Eight

    Hey Vivi :) I've been scanning over your past chapters, and I like the story so far! :) You've got a nice plot going, and your chapter releases are steady, ...

    May 31, 2015
  • Lyrics » Romantic, Fantasy Re: I can sing it loud

    Hey there! :) First of all, please excuse me for my rusty reviewing. It's been a while, so this'll be a bit rough... :) Lovely song you have here! I ...

    May 5, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Harassed.

    Hey there, Reet! First of all, welcome to the site! :D (I know I'm late) I actually adored the way you wrote this poem... using a word to end each ...

    Apr 13, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Teen Fiction Re: just an echo

    Hey there Gravity! Another really well-written, easily-relatable poem from you! :D You always do such an absolutely delightful job with these... I need to remember to leave a like for ...

    Apr 13, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Children Of Shadows Chapter Six Pursuit

    Hey Kevin! :D I've been reading along when I can, but I think I missed the last chapter, so I apologize in advance for anything I might miss in this ...

    Apr 7, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Spiritual Re: Encounter with Death

    Hey there! :) I really liked this poem! :) A nice thing to wake up to. (in my timezone, anyways...) I have only a few nitpicks, the first of which ...

    Mar 14, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Children Of Shadows Chapter 1 The Birth Of Magic

    Hey Kevin! :) You have an interesting story going here! :D There's quite a few grammar and spelling errors--all drafts have them at one point--and a few set-up no-nos, but ...

    Mar 14, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Historical Fiction Re: Prince Derek and the Road to Nothyng Chapter One

    Hello there! :) Were I to be perfectly honest, I would say that I originally thought you had misspelled 'Nothing' in your title. xD Once I figured out that it ...

    Mar 12, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative Re: Thoughts as he went further and further

    Hi there! :) I enjoyed reading this poem! I like the way you describe love, even though personally--though I have experienced this 'pain' you speak of, though maybe on a ...

    Mar 12, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » General, Fantasy Re: I Don't Die Anywhere in the Book—Chapter 1

    Hello! First of all, welcome to the site. I hope you stick around and enjoy your stay :) Second of all: This title! xD I really didn't know what to ...

    Mar 11, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: overflowing

    Hey Pocket! I was in a poetry kind of mood, and this one seems pretty popular. I can see why! You used some very nice imagery here, and even though ...

    Mar 11, 2015
  • Poetry » Culture, Narrative Re: Angelboy left home

    Hello Pompadour! :) As always, your poetry is amazing... I always get trapped up in it. It's almost dangerous, because I can spend so long reading your works. xD Anyways, ...

    Mar 11, 2015
  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: Late

    Hello! This certainly isn't what I expected this to be... I really loved how you slowly revealed what the narrator was talking about, level by level, so that I--as a ...

    Feb 16, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Culture Re: Just Meat

    Hello! I really liked this, no matter how saddening. It's very easy to forget where your food comes from, especially since a lot of providers make the process as separated ...

    Feb 12, 2015


Remember the rain that made your corn grow.
— Haitian Proverb