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Re: It's not like you're dying
Hey there, Ticktock. You know, I've got a buddy who likes to use the username Paradoxal_Clock; yours reminded me of hers for some reason XD Anyways, I know all too ...
Feb 3, 2016 -
Re: That's Called Life
Hey there!! Alright, as a fellow I'm-in-a-dark-place buddy, I could relate to the idea of this poem, both what was on the surface and the subtle notes. Everything good comes ...
Dec 2, 2015 -
Re: Dear Parents
Hey Artybirdy! I really liked your poem; it's easy for many to relate to, nicely written, and uses some pretty good language. I did notice a few points where it ...
Nov 28, 2015 -
Re: When Is It A Joy To Be Sad?
Hello Silver Fox!! :D Firstly, I've been meaning to review your works for quite a while now. I've finally found a break from school, so here we go! I've noticed ...
Nov 26, 2015 -
Re: A Locked Drawer
Hey there Artemis! :D I haven't reviewed or written poetry in awhile, so I might be a bit rusty. Please excuse any mistakes, and feel free to disregard any suggestions! ...
Nov 26, 2015 -
Re: Yes I Am
Hey there Rainbow!! I know there isn't much here to review, and cleverclogs went over most of everything I could, but here I am! As a part of the LGBT+ ...
Nov 18, 2015 -
Re: Not enough
Hello CandyWizard! :) I really enjoyed this poem, and for quite a few reasons. Firstly, you kept the rhythm of the poem solid even though it seems to be free ...
Sep 23, 2015 -
Re: Dirty Skies, Cloudy Knees
Hey Prez!! :D Okay, so I noticed that after Cloudy Skies, Dirty Knees, a lot of people started posting poems like this... (I haven't even read he original 'starting point' ...
Sep 22, 2015 -
Re: Unorthodox Thieves (Chap. 7): Group (Sorta) Bonding at Last
Hello Ender! :D Let me start off by saying I haven't read the previous chapters, so I'll avoid commenting on any confusion I might be having. After reading, however, I ...
Sep 21, 2015 -
Re: The Girl in the Fishbowl
Hello, Herb! :) First of all, wow. I absolutely LOVED this!! I mean, there were the few occasional grammar errors and the like, but the story itself was absolutely beautiful! ...
Sep 19, 2015 -
Re: The Rebels Part 1
Hey there, Klennon! :) I'm liking this so far; it's quite the good read. It took me a second to catch on at first--there were a few spots I noticed ...
Sep 5, 2015 -
Re: Chiravian Knights - Chapter 1
Hey there, Chiravian! I missed your prologue, but I'll go back and read it... I love stories like this! :D First of all, before I move on to nitpicks, I ...
Sep 5, 2015 -
Re: to death's tune
Hey there, Dearest! Firstly, welcome to the site! Congrats on posting a work so swiftly. :) I actually really liked this piece. It reminds me a lot of things I ...
Sep 5, 2015 -
Re: The Architect
Hey there Clairekcross! Welcome to the site!! :D This'll be my 100th review, but I haven't done any in quite awhile, so please excuse any errors or poor structure. I'll ...
Aug 29, 2015 -
Re: Believe Me.
Hello! Welcome to YWS! :) So I'm not usually too fond of short stories, in all honesty; unless it's done well, the plot always seems rushed and the characters underdeveloped. ...
Jun 8, 2015
