Sherlock

While the idea behind this poem is really quite good, I'm sorry to say that the poem itself was really poorly written. Bad grammar and awkward phrasing just made it ...

I like this poem, I do, but it's filled with rookie mistakes. I'm gonna point out the mistakes and make it better, Kay. "When you are worried DURING trouble," "So, ...

You are a goddess. Like, I, literally, want to worship at you feet. This piece is beautiful, and extremely heartbreaking, without being--dare, I say it-- overly emo. Your writing gave ...

This is really, really good. Loved the way it was written. Perfection.

I've completely edited this and this is the polished version of your piece: A writer. What defines a writer? They say we're the only ones who don't mind spending lots ...

My feelings are really just kinda messed up here, cause although I like the way it's written, and the way it's just so jarringly different to how most people write ...

I liked this poem, and for all it's clichès I think you've got a pretty good poem on your hands. I didn't like the fact that there was hardly any ...

Let's start off by pointing out the mistakes: "Cool smoky and white" I think there should be a comma after 'Cool' "In my homework he always helped" The sentence construction ...

I really like this poem, and unlike Magpie, I actually enjoyed the repetition. The poem's nice, clean and just very precise. I like the last stanza particularly. Didn't really have ...

The idea behind the story is brilliant, but I think the execution was little off. These sentences just seemed a bit awkward: "When I was a little girl, I always ...

The story's premise was lovely. I'd liked more fleshing out of the characters, I liked Danny but I didn't really feel for him when he died, maybe cause the story ...

Sometimes I forget how brilliant your mind is- it's hard not to, when we're fan girling about Sherlock together. But this. Wow. Mistakes are present, here and there, but I'll ...

It's not perfect, the writing was a little awkward in places, and by writing I mean the English (or maybe that's just me) but all in all, a really nice, ...

Oh My God. Brilliant. Simply brilliant. I loved the whole thing about Good and Bad. It's philosophy wrapped in really pretty English. I am speechless, cause of how amazing this ...

This poem was funny, but definitely has some things that need to be corrected. First nitpick: "Leaving Cinderella quite undernourished" I think it was only there for the sake of ...