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"you really do have the diet of a 7 year old with a liquor license" ~ Atticus

  • Poetry » General, General Re: My pretty little heart

    Hey Ten! Shady here with your review, as requested. ;) It's full of light and cold to touch . ~ This part feels a bit off, and I'm not sure ...

    Feb 1, 2013
  • Article / Essay » Culture, General Re: America the Beautiful

    Hey Loi! Shady here with a review! I don't review non-fiction very often, so I feel a bit out of my league, but this piece is strong and I felt ...

    Jan 29, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I Choked On the Words They Couldn't Swallow

    Hey Tor! Shady here with a short review for your short poem. ;) I liked this poem quite a bit. Just a few short lines, 12 mere words, but you've ...

    Jan 27, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Survive

    Hey Ayh! Shady here with your review! :) I'm new to reviewing poetry, but I'm going to try this anyway. Sorry if I'm not very good at it. Wow. I'm ...

    Jan 27, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Chasing Midnight

    Hey Nony! Shady here with your review! :) I liked your rhyme scheme quite a bit. This Oddity, how they connect. Muscle, spirit and intellect. and this Peculiarity, how they ...

    Jan 27, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: A Demon of Hearts

    Hey Aise! Shady here with your review! :) the one ' s who haven't quite learned ~ "ones", it's not possessive, nix the apostrophe. No other girls sincerity ~ The ...

    Jan 27, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Fragments

    Hey Ent! Shady here with your review, as requested. Firstly, there's nothing wrong with being in high school. I fancy I'm a fairly decent writer, and I'm still a lowly ...

    Jan 27, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Mystery / Suspense Re: James Volt, Final Revision.

    Hey Arlo! Sorry this took so long in the coming. I didn’t have any time the day you requested it, and I got sick shortly after. I finally got wifi, ...

    Jan 27, 2013
  • Poetry » Horror, Narrative Re: where love was made.

    Hey Arri! Shady here with a review! :) I don't review poetry often (and free-verse less so), but I'm going to give this a shot anyway. It looks like you ...

    Jan 27, 2013
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: In The New Year

    Hey Clayre! Shady here with your review! :) I'm new to reviewing poetry, but I'm giving it a shot. I agree with the reviewers before me. I don't like the ...

    Jan 27, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Kollek and Kiroy: ch.2

    Hey Ethri! Shady here with your review for chapter two! You already know how I roll, so I’ll get straight to the review... The Dwarf’s axe was an unstoppable force ...

    Jan 27, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Spiritual Re: A worthy dweller

    Hey Ayma! My advice has never been called professional before. I will endeavor not to disappoint. ;) Sorry if I repeat something that’s already been said. but in the darkest ...

    Jan 27, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Kollek and Kiroy: prologue to Ch.1

    Dude! What happened with Rovaalin? Here I am, waiting for you to come up with the next chapter with that, and you’re starting a new story on me? c: Never ...

    Jan 27, 2013
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Romantic Re: The Winter Prince part 1

    Hey Chi! Shady here with your review! I like how you wrote this in present tense. Not many authors (in my opinion) can make that work for them, but it ...

    Jan 27, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Removed

    Hey Fort! Shady here with a review for you! I'll be honest. I'm new to reviewing poetry. So please bear with me. I enjoyed this poem quite a bit. I ...

    Jan 27, 2013


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