SereneSimpliciT

Ok, I'm not going to get super technical with this like the girl before me did, partcially cause I myself didn't even know half of what sheen ripens. So I'm ...

Pardon my french, but I love you right now. I didn't know what this was poem was going to be about, in fact, I thought it was going to be ...

I really like the simplicity of this poem, but within it you make the big idea your relaying much easier to consume, and that's something a lot of writers have ...

Holy crap. I mean, holy crap. How the hell are you only 15?! Like dear lord, I'm like in awe right now. That is single-handedly the best poem I have ...

Oh I was so happy until you hit me with that last sentence. NOOOO! Why can't she not be married (I'm using double negatives, that's how upset I am), I ...

Huh. Well that was interesting XDD LOL So yeah, @Bball41 has already said a lot about this piece, so I'm going to try to say something else. I will point ...

I have only three issues with this; 1. It's really short. I get that lyrics repeat a lot, but this just seems kinda bare. I mean, I get the idea, ...

Ok, your vocabulary is on another planet in terms of how advanced it is at times. Like, I had to look up words! This is good . . . but ...

Ok, I am going to review this as not a professional, but myself, because right now I'm going through something like this. I was in a relationship for over a ...

Oooooh! I was right with you until the last four lines! DX This is uplifting, encouraging, insightful- And then you basically went back on everything you had said by saying ...

Well, you sure like to ask a lot of questions! Haha So, for some odd reason, I decided to read this piece a loud. Why is because if a poem ...

Ok, I'm going to try my best to review this, but I have one issue right off the bat; I can't exactly figure out what's happening, or what the exact ...

Uh, ok then XDD Well, I was expecting something really interesting and filled with metaphors . . . but it's just two words. I mean . . . wow, you ...

Oh my God, you don't know how happy I am to find this. I have missed reading rhyming poems that actually have a perfect meter. I appreciate your existence so ...

I think this is the first time I've actually read the poem and not just skimmed it. Dude, this is great, and I mean great. I love the metaphor of ...