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Hello! My name is Iamawriter and I am here to review your work!
I am not actually going to be reviewing this because let's be completely honest, there is nothing to really review except maybe one thing. I love how I was expecting this long poem but you said it all in one supercalifradulistic spectacular sentence. Thanks you sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo very much for writing this beautiful work!
Keep writing!
PS. Please don't be mad!
Hello! My name is Iamawriter and I am here to review your work!
I am not actually going to be reviewing this because let's be completely honest, there is nothing to really review except maybe one thing. I love how I was expecting this long poem but you said it all in one supercalifradulistic spectacular sentence. Thanks you sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo very much for writing this beautiful work!
Keep writing!
PS. Please don't be mad!
Hi WritingWolf(nice name by the way) Googlebot here to review.
Not actually a review because you know there is nothing much to review but I will still review to get some handy points to post my work. Also, because this work is still in the green room and someone at the end of the day will take the advantage of this factor, so I hope there is nothing wrong in reviewing this work. And I hope you wont feel bad if I take advantage of the fact that this work is still in the green room. I know you wont feel bad. So let's begin!
After my idiotic previous paragraph (Idiotic because it made no sense. And I know you would be feeling the same. Like, "What is this? Is this even a review?") But please don't feel bad about it or ask, "Do I deserve this?" Because the answer is no. You deserve better. When I look at right side of your work I see host of other poems which you wrote, but because I'm reviewing this, I'll have to speak only about this poem and not about the rest, so I'll only talk about this work.
Regarding this work, I like the title. It is attention grabbing and when the length of your work is so less, the only thing which might work in your favor the attention grabbing title. It gets you hooked at once and you feel, "Oh, let me read, what exactly this guy is talking about!" And you see, that does half of your job. I immedieatly (sorry if the spelling is wrong. I am writing on mobile) clicked the like button because I liked the title.
So that ends my short review. Just a question. Does this work have any relation with Gravity? (the user who commented below me) Just a curious question. Keep writing!
No. I have seen Gravity around but I've never actually talked with her. It was actually inspired by me dropping something... again...
Well see I warned you but SOMEONE wouldn't listen :p
Lol
Maybe you could share your fight with gravity? How did you fight against it, etc?
That would be helpful if I was trying to write a real poem, which I may go and do. But the purpose of this was solely to make people laugh. Usually when that is the goal the shorter the better.
-shrug- in all honestly I didn't laugh. Sometimes a one liner isn't the joke that cracks the person up.
There are a bunch of different types of humor. I mean, from what I know about American comedies and British comedies the type of humor can be quite different at times.
I was shooting for the short and sweet kind of humor, I think I did fairly good at it based on everyone else's reaction. If you had any other kind of humor in mind then I probably failed miserably.
I think it's just a matter of what the reader is used to and/or looking for.
Well, I definitely have to say
This made me laugh!
And I'll admit it was something I, and I'm sure many other people, weren't expecting, but it is most certainly a, very, short and humorous one-liner!
For me, there is not too much to say or correct about this, but something for me to say in my opinion.
Short, yet funny is always something that could make a person laugh or chuckle, and stuff like this is one of them!
So in general sense, I like it and think it was cute, and I totally encourage you to keep writing, and have fun with things like this!
Good Luck and Happy Writing!
-WL-
Thanks
Uh, ok then XDD
Well, I was expecting something really interesting and filled with metaphors . . . but it's just two words. I mean . . . wow, you only used two words!
I mean, the title is longer haha!
So, in terms of actually reviewing this, there's very little I can actually say. I mean, there's only one line, so I can't look at rhyme, meter, stanza quality. There's not enough that I can comment on the vocabulary or grammatical elements.
Though, I will tell you that I did laugh when I read this. I mean, I guess gravity will always win out in the end, it's probably the strongest law of nature.
This is simplistic, funny, and gets right to the point.
I honestly have no problems with this LOL
Keep writing!
Happy New Year!
~Maddie
Thanks for the review.
I honestly didn't expect to get any this long. lol
I'm glad it made you laugh.
Oh.