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  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: I Lost My Shoe.

    I started chuckling when I saw the title so I'm gonna do a short review. This is incredibly relatable on so many levels, not even pertaining to just shoes. I've ...

    Jul 29, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic Re: Lucy in the Sky with Maturity the Mystery Cat

    Hello! Maddie here to Review your poem. First off, I gotta say that the dynamic of rich vocabulary and so much amazing imagery I must say I'm very impressed. You ...

    Jul 29, 2017
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: Even Heroes Need Saving

    Hiya! Maddie here with a review for yoooooou! So, I'm not going to comment on like the one grammatical thing I saw, mainly 'cause Rydia already pointed it out. I'm ...

    Jul 2, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Horror Re: Oblivion

    Well then, it's been a while since I've done a review. Hopefully I'm not too rusty! Hi, I'm Maddie, and I'm reviewing your work. Now this is a very short ...

    Jun 23, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Devotion

    Hello! Haven't reviewed for a bit so thought I'd give it a go here! This is a very short, sweet, and to the point poem. I enjoy the fact that ...

    Dec 12, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: 18

    O.O Well that abruptly got dark at the end! I honestly wasn't expecting her to take pills. Props for being able to catch me off guard! But then again, I ...

    Jul 17, 2016
  • Poetry » General, Narrative Re: drown

    I'm going to start off with the most honest statement I can give; I don't fully grasp what this is trying to say. I do understand the undertones of "Hate ...

    Jul 17, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I Have Learned to Hate the Dark

    Hello there and welcome to YWS! I'm Maddie and I'm here review your poem! So I think this is a fine poem. You rhyme well, and it doesn't seem cheesy. ...

    May 14, 2016
  • Poetry » Science Fiction, Lyrical Re: Deeper, Bluer, Thought

    Damn. I mean, that's really all I can say, just . . . Damn. This is REALLY impressive. Not only is this well written, not only does it actually rhyme ...

    May 14, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: The Missing Piece

    Hello! Maddie here with a poetry review for ya! Ok, first and foremost, I really do like the concept of this piece; the idea of moving away and the effect ...

    Mar 3, 2016
  • Short Story » General, General Re: My Window

    I honestly picked this to review because you asked for it to be torn apart and for some reason I found that alluring. I like when authors are open to ...

    Mar 2, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Logic of Life

    Hi this is Maddie with a poetry review for you! Ok, I read this twice; once just reading, then again I read it out loud. What. the. heck. LOL I ...

    Dec 28, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: a damp place

    Hello, I'm Maddie and I'm here to review your poem Ok, so . . . I honestly can tell you that I don't understand this 100% Like, I think it's ...

    Dec 19, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Because as Women, Nothing is Legitimate

    Holy. Hell. Ok, so hi, I'm Maddie, and I'm here to review this . . . poem? Yeah, I agree with Rosendorn, this is no poem. This is an essay ...

    Dec 19, 2015
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Realistic Re: Only a Prayer Away

    Hey! Maddie here with a poetry review for you! I like the subtle build-up of the religious ideas. I like to believe that this is truly what will happen when ...

    Dec 11, 2015


she slept with wolves without fear, for the wolves knew there was a lion among them.
— r.m. drake