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  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: I Lost My Shoe.

    I started chuckling when I saw the title so I'm gonna do a short review. This is incredibly relatable on so many levels, not even pertaining to just shoes. I've ...

    Jul 29, 2017
  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic Re: Lucy in the Sky with Maturity the Mystery Cat

    Hello! Maddie here to Review your poem. First off, I gotta say that the dynamic of rich vocabulary and so much amazing imagery I must say I'm very impressed. You ...

    Jul 29, 2017
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Realistic Re: Even Heroes Need Saving

    Hiya! Maddie here with a review for yoooooou! So, I'm not going to comment on like the one grammatical thing I saw, mainly 'cause Rydia already pointed it out. I'm ...

    Jul 2, 2017
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Horror Re: Oblivion

    Well then, it's been a while since I've done a review. Hopefully I'm not too rusty! Hi, I'm Maddie, and I'm reviewing your work. Now this is a very short ...

    Jun 23, 2017
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Devotion

    Hello! Haven't reviewed for a bit so thought I'd give it a go here! This is a very short, sweet, and to the point poem. I enjoy the fact that ...

    Dec 12, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: 18

    O.O Well that abruptly got dark at the end! I honestly wasn't expecting her to take pills. Props for being able to catch me off guard! But then again, I ...

    Jul 17, 2016
  • Poetry » General, Narrative Re: drown

    I'm going to start off with the most honest statement I can give; I don't fully grasp what this is trying to say. I do understand the undertones of "Hate ...

    Jul 17, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I Have Learned to Hate the Dark

    Hello there and welcome to YWS! I'm Maddie and I'm here review your poem! So I think this is a fine poem. You rhyme well, and it doesn't seem cheesy. ...

    May 14, 2016
  • Poetry » Science Fiction, Lyrical Re: Deeper, Bluer, Thought

    Damn. I mean, that's really all I can say, just . . . Damn. This is REALLY impressive. Not only is this well written, not only does it actually rhyme ...

    May 14, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: The Missing Piece

    Hello! Maddie here with a poetry review for ya! Ok, first and foremost, I really do like the concept of this piece; the idea of moving away and the effect ...

    Mar 3, 2016
  • Short Story » General, General Re: My Window

    I honestly picked this to review because you asked for it to be torn apart and for some reason I found that alluring. I like when authors are open to ...

    Mar 2, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Logic of Life

    Hi this is Maddie with a poetry review for you! Ok, I read this twice; once just reading, then again I read it out loud. What. the. heck. LOL I ...

    Dec 28, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: a damp place

    Hello, I'm Maddie and I'm here to review your poem Ok, so . . . I honestly can tell you that I don't understand this 100% Like, I think it's ...

    Dec 19, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Because as Women, Nothing is Legitimate

    Holy. Hell. Ok, so hi, I'm Maddie, and I'm here to review this . . . poem? Yeah, I agree with Rosendorn, this is no poem. This is an essay ...

    Dec 19, 2015
  • Poetry » Spiritual, Realistic Re: Only a Prayer Away

    Hey! Maddie here with a poetry review for you! I like the subtle build-up of the religious ideas. I like to believe that this is truly what will happen when ...

    Dec 11, 2015


Painting is poetry that is seen rather than felt, and poetry is painting that is felt rather than seen.
— Leonardo da Vinci