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SecreteJournalist

  • Poetry » General, General Re: Luna Loving Friend

    Welcome To YWS, ScienceIsCoolMan! 'Ello! SecreteJournalist here for a quick review. Nitpicks: Without a care, does Ella bear Spread joy and hope everywhere This puzzled me. Does Ella bear spread ...

    Dec 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Your Eyes

    Happy Belated Birthday , Wey ! SecreteJournalist here for a review on your poem. c: Nitpicks: The iris is more intricate than weeks worth of a spider’s webwork, This sounded ...

    Dec 29, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: Let Peace Prevail

    'Ello! SecreteJournalist here for a review on your poem. If you don't mind, I'll go through nitpicks first and then praise. Nitpicks: 6 million orphaned, 2 million disabled, 1 million ...

    Dec 29, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: The Continuation of Grief

    'Ello! SecreteJournalist here for a quick review on your lovely little poem c: Nitpicks: See how tender grief flows Considering you've broken apart the rest of the poem with punctuation, ...

    Dec 29, 2014
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Narrative Re: Here there be Darkness :1:

    Hello! SecreteJournalist here for a quick review. I'll be off and on; reviewing this and watching Mulan. So I apologize in advance if I miss something! Nitpicks; I have just ...

    Oct 17, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: I Lost You, But It's Okay.

    Hello! SecreteJournalist here for a lovely little review on this lovely little poem! First, nitpicks. Then, praise. Nitpicks; It was all so cold. The day you decided That you didn't ...

    Oct 3, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Of their own accord

    Hello! SecreteJournalist here, but feel free to call me Brie. I'm here for a quick review. There isn't much to nitpick, but I do have a suggestion. The last line ...

    Oct 2, 2014
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Deep Sea

    Hello! SecreteJournalist here (but feel free to call me Brie, if you please) for a quick review on this lovely little poem. I'm going to go through the nitpicks, and ...

    Oct 2, 2014
  • Short Story » Realistic, Dramatic Re: La Biesta en Arriaga (or) Maternal Instincts (I can't decide yet :) )

    Hello! SecreteJournalist here for a review, but feel free to call me Brie. If you don't mind, I'llgo through nitpicks first just to get them out of the way. Nitpicks; ...

    Oct 2, 2014
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Romantic Re: Death of Adonis

    'Ello, SecreteJournalist here (but feel free to call me Brie if ya please) for a quick review on this lovely little poem. First off, the nitpicks. First line I notice ...

    Sep 24, 2014
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Romantic Re: The Struggle

    Hey-O! Brie here (though, you knew that c;) and I'm here to review your first work on YWS! Since you already have 2 tremendous reviews, Ill make this one short ...

    Sep 22, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: 1

    'Ello. I'm SecreteJournalist (as read on my username) but do feel free to call me Brie if you please. I suppose I'll get on to the review then! Nitpicks; Writing ...

    Jul 7, 2014
  • Other » General, General Re: The Stories~Random Genres and Stories

    Hey! SecreteJournalist here for a review. I'm gonna go through nit picks first, hope ya don't mind! They laughed at their silly jokes and have a great conversation. The readers ...

    Jun 14, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Scars

    Hey Sarai How Are You Today? It's Brie here for a review! To make it a wee bit more.. Interesting... I'm going to review in different colors or marquee codes... ...

    May 22, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: A Love Like Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde

    A quick review! Do I need to introduce myself... I mean, I don't think so xD Anyways, same routine. Likes and suggestions! Likes; I love how your poem starts off ...

    May 22, 2014


I would always rather be happy than dignified.
— Charlotte Brontë, Jane Eyre