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Re: Luna Loving Friend
Welcome To YWS, ScienceIsCoolMan! 'Ello! SecreteJournalist here for a quick review. Nitpicks: Without a care, does Ella bear Spread joy and hope everywhere This puzzled me. Does Ella bear spread ...
Dec 29, 2014 -
Re: Your Eyes
Happy Belated Birthday , Wey ! SecreteJournalist here for a review on your poem. c: Nitpicks: The iris is more intricate than weeks worth of a spider’s webwork, This sounded ...
Dec 29, 2014 -
Re: Let Peace Prevail
'Ello! SecreteJournalist here for a review on your poem. If you don't mind, I'll go through nitpicks first and then praise. Nitpicks: 6 million orphaned, 2 million disabled, 1 million ...
Dec 29, 2014 -
Re: The Continuation of Grief
'Ello! SecreteJournalist here for a quick review on your lovely little poem c: Nitpicks: See how tender grief flows Considering you've broken apart the rest of the poem with punctuation, ...
Dec 29, 2014 -
Re: Here there be Darkness :1:
Hello! SecreteJournalist here for a quick review. I'll be off and on; reviewing this and watching Mulan. So I apologize in advance if I miss something! Nitpicks; I have just ...
Oct 17, 2014 -
Re: I Lost You, But It's Okay.
Hello! SecreteJournalist here for a lovely little review on this lovely little poem! First, nitpicks. Then, praise. Nitpicks; It was all so cold. The day you decided That you didn't ...
Oct 3, 2014 -
Re: Of their own accord
Hello! SecreteJournalist here, but feel free to call me Brie. I'm here for a quick review. There isn't much to nitpick, but I do have a suggestion. The last line ...
Oct 2, 2014 -
Re: Deep Sea
Hello! SecreteJournalist here (but feel free to call me Brie, if you please) for a quick review on this lovely little poem. I'm going to go through the nitpicks, and ...
Oct 2, 2014 -
Re: La Biesta en Arriaga (or) Maternal Instincts (I can't decide yet :) )
Hello! SecreteJournalist here for a review, but feel free to call me Brie. If you don't mind, I'llgo through nitpicks first just to get them out of the way. Nitpicks; ...
Oct 2, 2014 -
Re: Death of Adonis
'Ello, SecreteJournalist here (but feel free to call me Brie if ya please) for a quick review on this lovely little poem. First off, the nitpicks. First line I notice ...
Sep 24, 2014 -
Re: The Struggle
Hey-O! Brie here (though, you knew that c;) and I'm here to review your first work on YWS! Since you already have 2 tremendous reviews, Ill make this one short ...
Sep 22, 2014 -
Re: 1
'Ello. I'm SecreteJournalist (as read on my username) but do feel free to call me Brie if you please. I suppose I'll get on to the review then! Nitpicks; Writing ...
Jul 7, 2014 -
Re: The Stories~Random Genres and Stories
Hey! SecreteJournalist here for a review. I'm gonna go through nit picks first, hope ya don't mind! They laughed at their silly jokes and have a great conversation. The readers ...
Jun 14, 2014 -
Re: Scars
Hey Sarai How Are You Today? It's Brie here for a review! To make it a wee bit more.. Interesting... I'm going to review in different colors or marquee codes... ...
May 22, 2014 -
Re: A Love Like Dr. Jekyll and Mr. Hyde
A quick review! Do I need to introduce myself... I mean, I don't think so xD Anyways, same routine. Likes and suggestions! Likes; I love how your poem starts off ...
May 22, 2014
