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Hey there, Scarlet here too review! I loved this poem, but before I get too that I want to point out the nitpicks. Still this darkness still is waning. It ...

Hey there! Scarlet here for a review! I liked this poem but i did notice a few structure and punctual problems. Life is too long. Life shouldn't be capitalized after ...

IHey there! Scarlet here for review! I know this is horrible but I love stuff like this. Tragic and emotional stories that tell of death or a sad story, something ...

Hey there! Scarlet here to review. Sorry I haven't reviewed it in so long, I've been busy with the cabin stuff and it took up my time. I'm here now. ...

Hey Pink, Scarlet here for another review! I enjoyed this chapter, better than the first actually. I was excited when you brought Jonah into the picture... (Despite what I think ...

Hey Pink, Scarlet here too review! It's actually a lot better but It still needs work. I'll help you with that alright? I have a few nitpicks. Why? Why does ...

Hey Pink, Scarlet here for review! This was actually just as interesting as Chap.1 I enjoyed it and hope to read more! I do have a few nitpicks though. - ...

Hey there! Scarlet here too review! I almost laughed myself out of my chair when I read your representation of 'blue ball'. When I thought about 'blue ball' the first ...

Hey there! Scarlet here too review! I personally love this poem, the sound/feel/though of war, gets my blood pumping. Everyone loves a little adventure right? I have a few nitpicks ...

Hey there, Scarlet here to review! Guess what? Your my last review for today! Congratulations! This was actually a really good poem. Beautiful and gives off a grand message. I ...

Hey there! Scarlet here for a review! Was this poem meant to be a joke? Just curious. I don't quite understand what the words are suppose to mean exactly. I ...

Hey there! Scarlet here too review! This was a good story though I was confused of what was going on? I wasn't sure what he was fighting at first. I ...

Hey there, Scarlet here to review! This chapter brought tears to my eyes. I don't like the discrimination used against gays/lesbians. I've had times when I've thought I was lesbian ...

Hey there, Scarlet here to review! I thought this was a beautiful poem that told a story. I do have a few nitpicks though: -I think you could've shortened the ...

It's so short, I'm slightly disappointed about how short it is and I can't really say much about it. Despite that it's a decent poem but not your best. I ...