Sassykat

I liked this, it was awesome. It had meaning to it. I think the rhyme in the first stanza (night/alright) was slightly forced, or even cliche, but other than that ...

I like this one. Short and simple. It could go a little deeper, adding a little more meaning, but personally I like it just the way it is. Fantastic.

Ummm....okay. Not sure I understood the purpose of this. Ranting? I'm sure this makes sense to someone.

Well...words! Those were words! I like those words. :D They were pretty words... Palindromic". I like it.

I asked you a question afterwords, It's spelled 'afterwards'. This was sweet. I think it would fit better in lyric poetry, but I think it's okay. I can totally relate ...

I can see nothing wrong with this other than the last line. You've used too many commas. here is what I think it should be: Yet never able, always failing ...

I changed the entire third stanza, don't be confused by jo's post!

This is a type of poem I've never seen before...something that's becoming a more common occurrence for me. I liked the way this was set up. I just have to ...

There, I changed it up a little.

"Even though it seems, I might go mad, and break my seams." You don't really need those commas.

I must say, this was...interesting. Really, the only thing I have to say is that the word 'mutant' doesn't ring right to me. But that is just an opinion.

Look out my window to see a galaxy worth full of new fish This line totally didn't make any sense to me. Other than that, I didn't notice anything. I ...

You certainly can ask that question, Gryphon. My inspiration came from a friend, who has been working on a story of her own even more random than this. I have ...

I completely changed that poem. I do admit, it was a little cheesy, but this is a poem I wrote years ago and thought I might have it checked out. ...

Sorry, one more thing, I also found it very unclear as to whether the boy is talking to the girl, or the other way around? It seems to be talking ...