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ITS SARAH12 here to review! As always, amazing job. And before you question that, I am being honest. Quit being overly critical of yourself. Next, I must compliment you again. ...

Hi! Sarah here to review. First off, I think this was a beautifully written poem. It is truly moving. In the third line of the second stanza, you use the ...

This is a great poem! I actually like how you didn't capitalize the word 'I'. It seems to make it flow. It blends in and creates the feel of a ...

Hi! Sarah here to review, like I said I would. I totally agree with @IceWinifredd and @LittleFox down there. This is a great piece of work. I like how you ...

Hi! Sarah here to review. I also agree with Hannah. With the rhymes, I suggest using RhymeZone. Its basically a dictionary a thesaurus, and every other type of book of ...

Hi! Sarah here to review. I have to agree with Prez. Turtles down there. This is such a well written poem, I would think that more people would read it! ...

Hi! Sarah here to review this amazing poem. This really pulled me in, because it perfectly illustrated the art of procrastination, which I myself, admittedly, partake in when it comes ...

Hi! Sarah here to review. This is a great poem, but the flow is off. When I read it, I can't realy focus on what is actually being said, because ...

Hi! Sarah here, not necessarily to review, seeing as I can't find anything. I love this poem. It really does inject loneliness and emotion into the reader, without it feeling ...

Hi! Sarah here to review. I have to say, you are quite good at these poems! You should consider writing more. I have scoured this for a while now, and ...

Hi! Sarah here to review. I must say, I like this poem! It illustrates perfectly the real world. I only have a few things to say, so I might put ...

Hi! Sarah here to review. I like this rhyme, and I agree, it can be expanded into a full length poem. Your last two lines kind of break the flow, ...

This is awesome! I can't write poetry like this. It's amazing what you can do with emotions, isn't it? I can't really find anything you could change, although your last ...

Hi, its Sarah here to review. I'm glad you've finally posted! I'll start with capitalization. "last night didn't go as planned."- Make sure you capitalize the first words of sentences. ...

Hi! It's Sarah here to review. I have to say, this is a hauntingly beautiful piece. And it is nearly completely free of spelling and grammatical mistakes. Throughout the whole ...