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Overall, a great metaphorical poem. Loved it. In a costume of white trimming and rippling fabric swaying, No flaws that I could see in this line. It is a wonderful ...

Wow, I haven't read The Ugly Duckling for years! But I remember the story and this is a great poem describing it! But, since it tells a story, I wouldn't ...

If I didn't know that you deliberately meant it, I would have screamed at you for using "my" at the beginning of each line. But, fortunately, you're safe. The thing ...

Well, I'm sorry, but if you meant it or not, the first thing I thought after I read this poem was not, "Aw, that's sad, it's so touching." No. My ...

Sorry, I didn't read the whole thing, but the first paragraph is pretty good, so I figured I would just work from there. I've seen that book! :D This essay ...

Nice poem! I like the rhyming and the subject, but... I guess I'm just really picky, as I'm a perfectionist. But the rhythm's not quite right, and that annoys me ...

Very touching. I like the topic you chose and the originality of the piece. I also like the repetition of some ideas, such as the summer rain and the poppies. ...

It's a nice start. A very real seeming setting of a tense family, making it emotional yet not overly so. I like your choice of title. “How have you been ...

right... Well, it is funny, though a bit far-fetched, if i do say so myself. You're a great script writer, though! So...I don't really get what happens at the end, ...

This is so very emotional, as the leaving of a friend. I go through that too, because my best friend moved away from me, and even though we still call ...

Yeah, I agree with everyone else. You wrote it when you were younger, and so now that you're older, It is even cuter. I don't really get some of it, ...

Ok, Colors, there's a lot of stuff that needs to be done with this. 1) Editing!!! Your spelling is not checked and there are not commas where there's supposed to ...

I agree with Izzy. It's a very nice poem, but there are a few things I'd like to say. Not only is it hard to understand, but the grammar isn't ...

I agree with TheNewHero. It hits me right in the heart to think of what happens in that poem/song. At first I thought the child's parents were going to divorce ...

Well, It's pretty good. I really like your ideas and creativity. I also like the flow of the poem. But, I really do not like all the "i"'s at the ...