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Hi there! First off, I'd just like to say that this is probably the best poem I've ever reviewed. No, seriously, it's just that cool. :) The subject is interesting, ...

Hi there indie! Here is yet another great essay. I have some general and some specific comments, so here goes-- Specific: "Money and resources fad away, but in the end, ...

Hi there! I hope you don't mind that I'm reviewing this so late, but I felt like it, and it is a very beautiful piece, so here goes. There are ...

Really well done! This is a well organized, concise, and understandable essay with good insight and a clear purpose. One thing I would do is to not have quite so ...

I will divide my review into sections so that it's easier to read. Specific things I noticed ('it's'): You used the word 'it's' very, very much. It was okay in ...

Hey there! I have a couple general comments and some specific ones too...I'll try not to repeat what Starleene caught, but I might have missed something. "We all have a ...

Wow! This is really incredible! I don't have a lot of super nitpicky things to say about it, just some general points, so here goes: This is kind of on ...

Hello, I have some very basic things to say about this, since it is hard for me to delve down very deep into the details of the essay. That does ...

Hello! This poem's second stanza was a bit confusing to me, but the general meaning got across, so that was alright. It's always okay to leave a little bit of ...

Wow! Another great poem! Once again, no spelling problems, which is always a great relief. It's really cool the way you portray different emotions. Though the actual word is never ...

Hi gummie! :) This is a really breathtaking poem. I love your style, because to make this have a strict scheme, I think, would kind of ruin it. There are ...

Heya! This is great. So classic and yet so un-classic. :) Honestly, there isn't that much to review, because first of all it isn't that long and second of all ...

Hi emilyleigh, This was an interesting letter. A lot of the meaning was very hard to discern, though, and especially in the first few paragraphs I really had no idea ...

Justine, Your writing is beautiful and moving. There are so many interesting and deep thoughts here that I don't have much actual critiquing to do! First off, I like how ...

Hi imyourdensity, Sometimes sad poems can be the best! To me, it's not necessarily the emotion in a poem that makes it beautiful but how well the emotion is expressed. ...