Remnant of Faultlessness

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   Whether or not they want to admit it, everyone strives to attain goodness. Mistakes and blunders of our human nature are often credited to a failed attempt at making things right, or the effect of a distorted perspective on what is acceptable. Perfection dissipated at the first bite of good and evil, but a remnant of faultlessness still remains. I believe that a person is not marked as “good” by who they are, but because of what they’ve done, and who or what compels them to do so. The following stanzas of Henry Wadsworth Longfellow’s “The Psalm of Life” spill light on the keys to achieving goodness. 

 

 

          “Life is real! Life is earnest!

          And the grave is not its goal;

          Dust thou art, to dust returnest,

          Was not spoken of the soul.

 

          Not enjoyment, and not sorrow,

          Is our destined end or way;

          But to act, that each tomorrow

          Find us farther than today.


          In the world’s broad field of battle,

          In the bivouac of Life,

          Be not like dumb, driven cattle!

          Be a hero in the strife!” (5-12; 17-20)



Not just “good”, but outstanding people who are destined for this see beyond the present, stand fast in their deliberate nonconformity, and are driven by something greater. 

 

   Life is short. People that stand out among the crowd of mediocrity recognize this, and make a point to carry out its full potential. They see beyond what lies in the past, and the frustrations or pleasures of the present. They are not perfect; mistakes are made, and tragedy doesn’t pick favorites for infliction. But oftentimes, the strongest are the ones that have suffered through the flames. Each day, they make it their goal to let the fire of their past refine them into a better person before the next sunrise. 

 

   Stand-outs are often labeled as chronic nonconformists. Their individualistic lives run against the grain of the popular vote of society. They stand up when everyone else chooses to sit. They sing when all else is silent. They dance when the whole world is watching. As Martin Luther King, Jr. states it, “History will have to record that the greatest tragedy of this period of social transition was not the strident clamor of the bad people, but the appalling silence of the good people.” Apathy and indifference are not an option; passion and exuberance reign in the hearts of the good. 

 

   Every good person has a method to their madness, a rationale within them that directs them towards righteousness. Jesus carried the personhood of God, Mother Theresa served to glorify Christ, and missionaries around the world today may consider both to be their guiding lights. Those esteemed have others they look up to - they model themselves after the experienced and the wise. They look to the whispers of conscience to lead them to the road less traveled by.

 

   In conclusion, the qualities of the virtuous are love, joy, patience, peace, kindness, self-control, gentleness, nobility, and faithfulness. Not only are they good, they leave imprints on those who are touched by them, inspiring the affected to be good as well. Good people have an aerial perspective on every situation thrown their way, and they swim against the cultural current with a guiding compass. The last three stanzas of the poem “The Psalm of Life,” by Henry Wadsworth Longfellow, sum up the essence of a good person:

 

          “Lives of great men all remind us
          We can make our lives sublime,

          And, departing, leave behind us

          Footprints in the sands of time; --

 

          Footprints, that perhaps another,

          Sailing o’er life’s solemn main,

          A forlorn and shipwrecked brother,

          Seeing, shall take heart again.” (25-32)

 

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Sapi wrote a review · Sun Jan 27, 2013 7:17 am

Really well done! This is a well organized, concise, and understandable essay with good insight and a clear purpose.

One thing I would do is to not have quite so many quotes; although it is very well related to your topic and explains some of your points, it takes away from your writing when there are big chunks of someone else's added in. This could probably be fixed without even taking any of it away- you could just split up the quotes from Longsfellow and stick them back in to different parts of the essay where they are most applicable. You can leave a short quote at the end, but personally I think it is better if you put the quotes all before the conclusion, so that the conclusion is the last thing we read.

Some littler things that I noticed...

"Not just “good”, but outstanding - people who are destined for this see beyond the present"

I personally think the sentence makes more sense if you take the hyphen out entirely, and just leave it as 'outstanding people who are...".

" Jesus carried the personhood of God, Mother Theresa served to glorify Christ, and missionaries around the world today may consider all three to be their guiding lights. "

All three? In the two phrases before, you began each phrase with a specific person. That only amounts to two people. I am confused...

Okay, now for the things that really blew me away.

"Each day, they make it their goal to let the fire of their past refine them into a better person before the next sunrise."

Oh my gosh! This is so beautiful! I don't think I have ever seen a more beautiful metaphor!

"They sing when all else is silent. They dance when the whole world is watching."

You are incredible at choosing the right words. If I wrote this, I can't tell you how proud I would be of myself.

" They look to the whispers of conscience to lead them to the road less traveled by."

Yay! The road less traveled by! :D

Anyways, I hope you found this helpful, (though I guess it's pretty late), and please post more of your essays, and pm me when you do! It was really lovely to read your work. :)

Sapi

P.s. There was a weird formatting thing. Some of the words were way smaller than others...don't know why.

Oh goodness! I didn't realize the format mishap until you mentioned it - I will fix that, thanks!
Thank you so much for your review - very helpful! I will work out the little kinks.



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