Sam

It's probably too early to tell- but WHAT? This is mucho confusing, sorry. Is this person like dead or something? sometimes leaving little teeny hints to make us think is ...

At first, I thought it was interesting. You use 'I'll go this way, you'll go that way' and we were kind of excited to find out who you were so ...

I'm a sucker for strangled grammar. Which was why i loved the last two lines. :D AH! i know what's missing...there's no real end to it. Plus, you don't explain ...

Ha ha. this is very interesting. Love the title; i didn't get it at first until i read it. again, ha ha. No critique, just a couple grammar things. But ...

ahh! no commas! RESIST, WOMAN! NO COMMAS IS GOOOOD! sorry...ha ha. I was seriously rolling when I read this. it is soo hilariously the mature one, reading a poem and ...

critique. Great poem, though, (I know it's been said but still...) loved the whole thing about blood. I'm seriously strange, but still, past the blood, you did really do a ...

FIRESTARTER! DON'T LISTEN! NO CAPS! AHHH!!! whoops...sorry. I personally like poems better with no caps. It's a lot more natural and less clunky, so to speak. It's like reading a ...

I liked this poem, but overall it was so-so. I don't think it really had the bang you were looking for...some critique, anyway. :D 'It's getting closer on my tail'- ...

Yeah...i was about to say that myself. First of all, Nikki, you don't really tell us WHY this Sara girl can't go to the dance. Then you say she has ...

I loved the title as well...although, I have to agree with Skye Demon. come on, you're Member of the Month! Knock our socks off! ah well, that was real critique, ...

I know...i really like this piece because you can really get into the character's mind. i've never beeen in a situation like the one Rachel's in, but yet you have ...

My critiques- 1. You start way to many sentences with 'I' and 'I'm' in the first paragraph. Just cut down on a few of those. 2. You use 'stinging' as ...

My only critique would be that at the beginning, she says she's way too wierd to ever have a boyfriend. It sounds kind of cheesy, especially when they kiss without ...

I completely LOVED this poem...all the things about 'I'm not insane, I just understand the truth...oh my god I loved that line. My only critique would be that you kind ...

I loved the comment about true, unfortuanately! :D I reallly, really liked this, it was very nice and it made you think, to say the least. No critique! btw, Maroon ...