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  • Poetry » Literature, Spiritual Re: Freedom

    Hi there! Happy review day to you. The title is very pleasing and so is the content. Which human heart won't be appealed by the very essence of freedom? The ...

    Jan 26, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: Fat Cat

    Hi Anshira! And Happy Review Day! Congratulations on writing a particularly entertaining piece of Children's poetry. It has uniformly humorous words, simple AABB rhyme and an enjoyable rhythm to suppo

    Jan 26, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Humor Re: Words out of 'a b c'

    Hi! And I declare this is THE BEST free verse I've ever read on YWS or anywhere else for that matter. The "free yet structured"(irony? Nay!) internal pattern, the near-to-perfect ...

    Jan 26, 2014
  • Article / Essay » Culture, Realistic Re: I am a selfish

    Hello there! First of all, I would like to let you know that I don't have a good sense of English grammar and punctuation myself. Moreover, it is a problem ...

    Jan 26, 2014
  • Poetry » General, Review Re: Review Day Rhapsody

    Hey there Teammate! Great piece of "spirit booster" you have here. You taking time to write this just for our team is very praiseworthy. I know that you must have ...

    Jan 26, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Happy Complex

    Hi there Teammate! I am here to review your wonderful poem here on this review day. Written in free verse, this poem serves as a good alternative to the much ...

    Jan 26, 2014
  • Poetry » Satire, Humor Re: Trap!

    Hi there! Happy Review Day! Now I haven't really written a lot of reviews here, hence I don't think I will be exactly helpful with my review here. Yet I ...

    Jan 26, 2014
  • Short Story » Horror, Other Re: Sister's Keeper

    Hi there! I hope you are having a good time. I would like to state beforehand that I haven't written a lot of reviews and hence I may not be ...

    Jan 25, 2014
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Culture Re: Frostbite

    Hi! I've read many of your works and I think they are really great. Now, about this poem here, I read it a few hours earlier but I wasn't really ...

    Dec 31, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: The Poem I Couldn't Write

    Wow! This work here,describes its narrator's inability to construct a poem, that too in a charmingly poetic way. What an irony! The narrator can easily be generalized to represent most ...

    Dec 28, 2013
  • Poetry » Narrative, Teen Fiction Re: Long Sleep

    This poem, I have to say,really compels the reader to feel the sadness and depression of the character. Right from the beginning, it narrates the state of his devastation so ...

    Dec 25, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Enjoy You Feast

    Hi Peace! And that is a great name! I am really new on reviewing other writer's work; so I haven't yet learned to be all critical about them and point ...

    Dec 20, 2013
  • Poetry » General, Lyrical Re: Army of One.

    Hello Rachel! I read your poem and re-read it. And then I read it again, hoping to find some flaws that I could be all critical about and write my ...

    Dec 18, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: party time

    Nice! This seems to be a fine lyrics for what could be a great and popular pop song. If you can sing, you should definitely record it with some great ...

    Dec 18, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: .

    This is so short; but what it implies is so much powerful that it hits you in a rather quick blow. I felt kinda shocked as soon as I got ...

    Dec 17, 2013


A person is a fool to become a writer. His only compensation is absolute freedom. He has no master except his own soul, and that, I am sure, is why he does it.
— Roald Dahl