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Re: Freedom
Hi there! Happy review day to you. The title is very pleasing and so is the content. Which human heart won't be appealed by the very essence of freedom? The ...
Jan 26, 2014 -
Re: Fat Cat
Hi Anshira! And Happy Review Day! Congratulations on writing a particularly entertaining piece of Children's poetry. It has uniformly humorous words, simple AABB rhyme and an enjoyable rhythm to suppo
Jan 26, 2014 -
Re: Words out of 'a b c'
Hi! And I declare this is THE BEST free verse I've ever read on YWS or anywhere else for that matter. The "free yet structured"(irony? Nay!) internal pattern, the near-to-perfect ...
Jan 26, 2014 -
Re: I am a selfish
Hello there! First of all, I would like to let you know that I don't have a good sense of English grammar and punctuation myself. Moreover, it is a problem ...
Jan 26, 2014 -
Re: Review Day Rhapsody
Hey there Teammate! Great piece of "spirit booster" you have here. You taking time to write this just for our team is very praiseworthy. I know that you must have ...
Jan 26, 2014 -
Re: Happy Complex
Hi there Teammate! I am here to review your wonderful poem here on this review day. Written in free verse, this poem serves as a good alternative to the much ...
Jan 26, 2014 -
Re: Trap!
Hi there! Happy Review Day! Now I haven't really written a lot of reviews here, hence I don't think I will be exactly helpful with my review here. Yet I ...
Jan 26, 2014 -
Re: Sister's Keeper
Hi there! I hope you are having a good time. I would like to state beforehand that I haven't written a lot of reviews and hence I may not be ...
Jan 25, 2014 -
Re: Frostbite
Hi! I've read many of your works and I think they are really great. Now, about this poem here, I read it a few hours earlier but I wasn't really ...
Dec 31, 2013 -
Re: The Poem I Couldn't Write
Wow! This work here,describes its narrator's inability to construct a poem, that too in a charmingly poetic way. What an irony! The narrator can easily be generalized to represent most ...
Dec 28, 2013 -
Re: Long Sleep
This poem, I have to say,really compels the reader to feel the sadness and depression of the character. Right from the beginning, it narrates the state of his devastation so ...
Dec 25, 2013 -
Re: Enjoy You Feast
Hi Peace! And that is a great name! I am really new on reviewing other writer's work; so I haven't yet learned to be all critical about them and point ...
Dec 20, 2013 -
Re: Army of One.
Hello Rachel! I read your poem and re-read it. And then I read it again, hoping to find some flaws that I could be all critical about and write my ...
Dec 18, 2013 -
Re: party time
Nice! This seems to be a fine lyrics for what could be a great and popular pop song. If you can sing, you should definitely record it with some great ...
Dec 18, 2013 -
Re: .
This is so short; but what it implies is so much powerful that it hits you in a rather quick blow. I felt kinda shocked as soon as I got ...
Dec 17, 2013
