Rydia

We're all just people under the coloured user names so no problem! And this version is much better and I think adding the more modern language has given it a ...

No problem and yes, cellophane brings a much stronger image with it and scent makes more sense now xD

That's okay as well - I use poetry as an emotional outlet too :)

No problem and I look forward to hearing your feedback on my feedback in that case! I may actually get to the last chapter on Friday as I have the ...

That's really interesting actually and I can see where you were going with the stones now. My brother has a form of autism - asperger syndrome - and I'm a ...

No prob and it's a lovely map!

Oh so like a BLT but with egg instead, I see! And no prob :)

Oh, boy did I get that wrong xD Sorry! I think it was the swilling the change around and selling stories to strangers that gave me that image but even ...

Oh! I don't know how I ended up on the older version as I could have sworn I was following the links at the side but noted and I'll be ...

No problem!

I'm not sure about reviewing goddess, hehe but no problem! :)

Thanks for the review! It's probably that I'm trying too hard to stick to the structure of the climbing rhyme poem - that's why the line breaks are every four ...

I'm well thank you, and I hope you are too? Ah, so like a drawing of the kimono rather than an actual kimono? Maybe the first line should be 'On ...

Thank you for your comments but I think my sister and I are less cynical then you ;) Weddings are for love. They're certainly not done for the gifts as ...

Thank you! I'll take another look and yes, I hope the wedding goes well too xD