This poem had a really interesting beat and rhythm that kept it moving very well. It had really great flow and never felt choppy or unnatural. As dearestdeli explained, it's very sensual which is great! Finding the sensuality in a poem can be really hard and you tackled that pretty well. I do wish the poem had more levels since it feels like it like it kind of has the same emotional platform up until the last stanza.
The metaphors were beautiful, the poem had nice flow and this piece was an overall gold star. (Side note: I absolutely LOVED the line 'run rivers down my spine'. It just... sounds nice, you know?)
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Reviews: 27
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