Rurouni

Hmm... This is interesting. It needs a little work, here and there. I think you paid more attention to your writing. I can't think of anything else, though. Keep it ...

Updated.

Note to everyone, the MC is a guy... Not a she, it's a he.

Messed up I clicked the wrong button.

Wow. I sense this is somewhat deep-ish. I like how you wrote this. It's really cool and good. I can feel the struggle, even though is doesn't talk about them. ...

This is soo cool! I picture a Apocalypse scene, its very interesting though. I really like "The cold fire of fear" that's my favorite line out of them all. It's ...

WOW. Ayden, I really.. Feel your emotion in this.... Its just... Wow. It speaks and screams you. It shows your struggles. And your wish.. I'm simply. Just. Wow. This is ...

THANK YOU CATNIP!!! I AM ALSO LOOKING FOR A WRITING BUDDY TO CO-WRITE WITH ME. I WILL TEST YOU. FOR MY OWN CRAZY REASONS.

Hi, I don't think there's anything here drinkonthemoon. Unless the poem is referring that nothing is something and nothing need to be seen. I really think you forgot to post ...

Amazing, I loved it! Its full of funny things, and the beginning is very sad. The Gear is a little confusing. But I liked this story. Its cool.

I wish you would have written more. It seems to stop too soon. Its a nice poem , but I feel it needs more . Maybe you could describe the ...

I love this. It is just so well written..

I love this. It is just so well written..

I love this. It is just so well written..

I updated the formatting. Hopefully this will improve readability. Any tips on formatting?