Rurouni

Hia! Rurouni here to review! I liked this, it was nice. I get what you were going for. One thing I'd suggest is maybe make the rhyme a bit more ...

Hey, Ruro here. First off, take a look at ALL of your sentences. Do they really make sense? No? Okay, go back and fix them. Keep your tenses in order. ...

Hi! Rurouni here! We should get into it, yes? This has a good concept. But you went off theme. Lady bugs? That's too far off the road for me personally, ...

Hello! Rurouni wandering here to review! This was a good concept! Though a few of the stanzas feel forced, and you have some repetition (the okay-ish kind)... So we'll hop ...

Hello! Rurouni wandering in to review! This one really liked your work! I must say... Though I'm sure you've gotten this before, but poetry tends to be broken into stanzas, ...

Well... I must say this is... a good argument... But there are a LOT more things besides Retard we can get rid off. Like, every woman needs to be this ...

Ruro here! A bit late for review day, eh, still here! This is a VERY interesting concept, and frankly, I like it! Have a like *clicks like button*. So here's ...

Hia! Happy Review Day! -yay!!- Okay, this was interesting. I feel like almost that the wolves are angels? Maybe? Maybe not? It was definitely interesting for sure. However, I just ...

Hi! This is really cool! This is a short review, but I'm here anyways! I like the use of God, but maybe its just... Too many times? Maybe "The Holy ...

Hullo! Rurouni has wandered here to review! Let's jump into it, alrighty? I like the beat I got when I read it. But, some words seem, to go out of ...

Hia... This is.. Interesting. I liked it. Now, it's not really choppy, but to someone else it may seem choppy, you don't need punctuation on every single line (even though ...

Hmm.. I had to review, what can I say? So, I LOVE how you say "Haha!" it's always been something that I've done, adds some character. The profanity, eh, could ...

Hello! Rurouni again! (This wanderer likes your works!) Interesting work. I'd have to agree with the reviewer shino. This doesn't really grab my attention, it does when you begin to ...

Hello! Rurouni here to review! Interesting poem, but I'm going to cut to my nitpicks to make this easier for both of us... I tend to ramble when I first ...

Hia! Rurouni here to review! Interesting poem. I like your use of profanity (as odd as that might sound). Some people just go off cussing with no real rhyme or ...