Ruby68

Hi there! First of all I really like this piece! I like your style of writing a lot. You did a really nice job of describing the characters in such ...

Hey there! I really liked this work! I like the mystery of the characters especially the stranger, it leaves a lot to the imagination. There is very little that I ...

I really liked this poem!! It sounded a bit like spoken word poetry to me. I'm not sure about the use of capitals here. In a way it gives those ...

Hi! First off I really like this poem! I like how you start out with a form and then kind of branch off and start to talk about how your ...

hi, happy review day! This is a really great poem! I loved it. I love your use of repetition with the phrase "Mirror, my mirror, my one, my all" I ...

Wow this is really sad. I loved it though. It was beautiful and showed the tragedy and sadness of losing a child you haven't met yet in circumstances outside of ...

Hi! Happy review day! I liked this poem overall. It's an original concept to write a poem from the perspective of a ghost, or perhaps someone who just feels invisible. ...

Hi, happy review day! I liked this poem. I guess the point is to make the reader think, and it does kind of do that. I didn't really like your ...

Hi, happy review day! First of all I'd like to say that I really liked this poem! It was beautiful at the beginning and the twist at the end was ...

Hi, happy review day! Wow! This poem is amazing! It's very dark, but I like it a lot. The feeling of "Someone else/would hear it/Someone else/would call" this is very ...

Hi, happy review day! I'm here to rescue you from the green room! Honestly, I liked this more than I was expecting to. I definitely liked the second part better ...

Hi, happy review day! I really liked this piece. I agree with katefrench461 in that I read this as sort of a diary entry or perhaps a letter. This could ...

Hi and happy review day! I loved this poem! It's a completely different perspective, the one of the (as far as we know) villain. I love how you captured the ...

Hi, and happy review day! I really loved this poem! I find it hard to show anger in poetry, and here you have done it so perfectly. I really like ...

Hi! Happy Review day! I really loved this poem. It's beautifully worded and perfectly portrays the feelings of writer's block. I'm pretty sure everyone on this website can relate to ...