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Re: Dear Best Friend...
Hi, here with a review. First of all I really like your letter to your best friend and I also like the fact that many people can relate to it. ...
Aug 21, 2016 -
Re: Crimson Seas and Burning Suns
Hi, here with a review! First of all, I really liked your description because it has strong imagery and I could really imagine this happening. Also, I really liked the ...
Aug 7, 2016 -
Re: exception to the rule, my beautiful boys
Hi, here with a review! First of all I wanted to say that I really like the fact that you started with a rhetorical question- it really hooked me. I ...
Aug 7, 2016 -
Re: Hallways
Hi! Here with a review! First of all, I wanted to say that just the tittle caught my attention and I really enjoyed reading your short story. I really like ...
Aug 7, 2016 -
Re: A suicide note
Wow, I really enjoyed reading this. Even the tittle itself captured my attention and when the note finishes,it makes me wonder what could have happened? Why did it happen? I ...
Aug 7, 2016 -
Re: Cold
Hi, firstly I wanted to say that you're title caught my attention because it was short but it made me wonder about what this poem could be about. I also ...
Aug 6, 2016 -
Re: Love Hurts.
Hi, firstly, I wanted to say that you're titles caught my attention mainly because it was short. I really liked the fact that you have used short sentences and your ...
Aug 6, 2016 -
Re: for him.
Hi, I just wanted to say that I love the fact that you used short sentences and repetition. Also, I really like the fact that you ended on a short ...
Aug 6, 2016 -
Re: Abused
Hi! I really loved your story. I like the use of vocabulary. The title itself attracted me to read your story. Well done. I really like the metaphor you have ...
Apr 7, 2016 -
Re: All you ever want
Hi! I really liked your poem! The layout is really good! I like the vocabulary you have chosen. The way you have used repetition, is so good and it doesn't ...
Apr 1, 2016 -
Re: if i jumped off a cliff you would do it too
Hi! I really like the use of vocabulary you have used, I like the layout. The tittle is attractive and the way you have worded this makes the reader feel ...
Apr 1, 2016 -
Re: The Living Abyss - Chapter 7: The Soft Fabric of Reality
Hi! I would like to start off, by saying that I really liked the use of vocabulary, they way you made them understandable by using better vocabulary. The tittle itself ...
Apr 1, 2016 -
Re: By Its Cover
Hi! I really liked the use of punctuation you have used, the layout, the use of short sentences. I like the choice of words you have used! I really like ...
Apr 1, 2016 -
Re: Sorry
Hi! To start off, I think this poem was touching, cute and I like the choice of vocabulary you have chosen! This poem almost flows, and that what makes people ...
Apr 1, 2016 -
Re: Promted Writing_Take Two
Hi! I really like the plot of the story, I find it funny! I like the choice of words you have you have used. Not only that but I also ...
Apr 1, 2016
