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Rosy234

  • Other » Romantic, Realistic Re: Dear Best Friend...

    Hi, here with a review. First of all I really like your letter to your best friend and I also like the fact that many people can relate to it. ...

    Aug 21, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Crimson Seas and Burning Suns

    Hi, here with a review! First of all, I really liked your description because it has strong imagery and I could really imagine this happening. Also, I really liked the ...

    Aug 7, 2016
  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: exception to the rule, my beautiful boys

    Hi, here with a review! First of all I wanted to say that I really like the fact that you started with a rhetorical question- it really hooked me. I ...

    Aug 7, 2016
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Hallways

    Hi! Here with a review! First of all, I wanted to say that just the tittle caught my attention and I really enjoyed reading your short story. I really like ...

    Aug 7, 2016
  • Short Story » Romantic, Horror Re: A suicide note

    Wow, I really enjoyed reading this. Even the tittle itself captured my attention and when the note finishes,it makes me wonder what could have happened? Why did it happen? I ...

    Aug 7, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Cold

    Hi, firstly I wanted to say that you're title caught my attention because it was short but it made me wonder about what this poem could be about. I also ...

    Aug 6, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Love Hurts.

    Hi, firstly, I wanted to say that you're titles caught my attention mainly because it was short. I really liked the fact that you have used short sentences and your ...

    Aug 6, 2016
  • Short Story » Romantic, Dramatic Re: for him.

    Hi, I just wanted to say that I love the fact that you used short sentences and repetition. Also, I really like the fact that you ended on a short ...

    Aug 6, 2016
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Abused

    Hi! I really loved your story. I like the use of vocabulary. The title itself attracted me to read your story. Well done. I really like the metaphor you have ...

    Apr 7, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: All you ever want

    Hi! I really liked your poem! The layout is really good! I like the vocabulary you have chosen. The way you have used repetition, is so good and it doesn't ...

    Apr 1, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: if i jumped off a cliff you would do it too

    Hi! I really like the use of vocabulary you have used, I like the layout. The tittle is attractive and the way you have worded this makes the reader feel ...

    Apr 1, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Supernatural Re: The Living Abyss - Chapter 7: The Soft Fabric of Reality

    Hi! I would like to start off, by saying that I really liked the use of vocabulary, they way you made them understandable by using better vocabulary. The tittle itself ...

    Apr 1, 2016
  • Short Story » Realistic, Narrative Re: By Its Cover

    Hi! I really liked the use of punctuation you have used, the layout, the use of short sentences. I like the choice of words you have used! I really like ...

    Apr 1, 2016
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Sorry

    Hi! To start off, I think this poem was touching, cute and I like the choice of vocabulary you have chosen! This poem almost flows, and that what makes people ...

    Apr 1, 2016
  • Short Story » Humor, General Re: Promted Writing_Take Two

    Hi! I really like the plot of the story, I find it funny! I like the choice of words you have you have used. Not only that but I also ...

    Apr 1, 2016


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