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Hey, here with a review. First, I really like the tittle as it really captured my attention. Then, I really liked the layout. It was different and made the piece ...

Hi, here with a review! The tittle really drew me in to reading your piece. I think you should label this piece as a short story even though, it would ...

Hey, here with a review. I really liked this poem, it was unique. The tittle really grabbed my attention and throughout the whole poem, the reader gets more anxious about ...

Hey, here with a review. I was draw to your piece mainly because of the tittle, so good job on that. First can I just say, I was reading this ...

Hey, here with a review. First of all, I really liked this piece, it was graceful, elegant and just simply beautiful. This piece is exactly what I look for in ...

Hey, here with a review. First of all, I really liked your poem it flows and I don't think that any bit of this was rushed and it was graceful ...

Hey, here with a review. First of all, I really liked your unique idea of a short story. As you read on, you feel more and more sympathetic towards the ...

Hi, here with a review. Firstly, the title grabbed my attention so well done for that. Next, when I read the piece it made me sympathies with this creature. However, ...

Hi, here with a review. I really liked the language and the vocabulary you've used. It was filled with imagery and I really enjoyed it. I like how you've ended ...

Hi, here with a review. First of all, I really enjoyed your poem, I think it's unique and full of imagery. The use of rhetorical questions are very good. Through ...

Hi, here with a review. I really loved your piece, it rhymed, it was descriptive and it was easy to imagine. I liked how you described what they felt and ...

Hi, here with a review. I really liked this unique structure and I liked how you've switched from the narrarator to the event. This gives the reader a feeling as ...

Hi here with a review. I really liked this short peace. The title was very grabbing and I like the structure of your short piece. I like that you've used ...

Hi, here with a review. Firstly, the title grabbed my attention and I really liked reading your poem. I liked how you have structured your poem. A way to improve ...

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