RosePetal8965

Hey Rose here for another review! First let me say that I really enjoyed this poem. I really liked where you are writing in this poem about how this guy ...

Hey Rose here for another review! First to start off you are a very talented writer and you should continue to write poetry. Ok for the first poem where you ...

First of all I really liked your story!!! I have questions about a few things. Also there a few corrections. "Be nice" my after said. (QUICK QUESTION IS THAT SUPPOSED ...

First of all I really liked you story. There are some grammar issues that I will tell you below. The world turned black and white last year. The sky’s brilliant ...

I really liked this chapter. I really think that you should keep writing. I wish I could have read the other chapters. I really do think that this chapter grabbed ...

Hello and Happy Review Day!!! First of all I really liked your short story. It was really well written. Also I liked it how you separated the story into paragraphs. ...

Hello and Happy Review Day!!! First of al let me say I really enjoyed your poem!!! There was a couple of grammer issues like for instance. "It's hidden safely from ...

I really like your story. I think you should continue writing. There are a few grammar mistakes, but that can be fixed. Other then that your story is really good. ...

First of all your story was really good. Second of all you should keep writing stories. There are a couple of grammar issues, but it still is really good. I ...

First of all your story was amazing. I really did enjoy it. One thing though I did not understand you first sentence so you might want to try to make ...

First of all let me say that this poem is amazing. I really like the first sentence where you wrote "Why does she always forget us?" because it says a ...

I loved the first chapter because it basically gets you attention right at the start. I liked how in the first chapter it is all about love because that tells ...

I loved you beginning "A breath never taken. Laughs never rung. Words left unspoken. Some songs never sung." because it really stood out to me. Also I liked it how ...

I really loved how you say all of your deepest things. It must have been really hard to say those things. You may think those thing, but they ware not ...

I really loved how you mentioned everything about where you are from. Also I really loved how you mentioned all the 5 senesces. I was also glad to see that ...