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What's review day without reviewing a poem by strange, eh? I think you may be Walking The Cow a bit in this poem. You have some interesting images, but there ...

Hello! Okay, I'm going to tell you straight-up that I don't think the massive repetition works in this. It gets monotonous, and it gets its own line every time it ...

Hey there! I've been reviewing all the cloudy/skies whatever poems. So. I suppose you probably wrote this poem mostly for a joke, but I'm still here to review it. As ...

Hello! Okay, so I like the images you have cobbled together here, but that's just what they feel like: cobbled together. Nothing here really fits together for me. It's probably ...

Hi again Cairo! I loved this poem. You know, I think your poems could all go very well into a book or something. They're all so polished, and they have ...

Hey pomp! So you already got a lot of reviews for this, so I hope you don't mind another! I just wanted to complete my clouds/dirt/whatever series of reviews. And ...

I am finishing up on all the dirt/cloud whatever poems that have been floating around Alrighty. So I like the story that's behind this, the temptation of freedom beckoning, even ...

Hai pomp~ I need to get my reviewing underway for today :) So... The first half of this seemed very unconnected. Each stanza pretty much kinda connected to itself in ...

Hello! Since you seemed interested in what this poem meant to others, I'll tell you what it meant to me. To me, this poem is talking about those who are ...

Hello! This is really fantastic. I love the metaphors here. They are really quite effective. I've heard the puzzle piece thing before, but never explained so effectively, and so any ...

Hiya I like the simplicity in this, and the emotion I feel when I read it. There's a couple things that I think could be improved. First, Cola and a ...

Hello! So, for the start of your poetry career, this poem is pretty solid. I really like what you have going on here, with all the images and memories. I ...

Heya steg. So you have some interesting images here, but I feel like they aren't coming together properly. I can't get a clear picture at all of what's going on ...

Haha! Hi ChickenBrothWater! I liked this poem. It was cute. I'm going to point out all the little things I think could be improved, or at least thought-upon. First, why ...

Hello! The first thing I noticed about this was the formatting. It's very space-y and that makes it more difficult to read online. Have you tried the shift+enter trick for ...