RokitaVivi

If theirs one word to describe your poem, its nostalgia. That's the vibe it gives off. The title fitting for this piece and captures the season. The description is vivid, ...

Hiya, Rokita here for a good old review! Now let's get this started :D What I like? How the story starts is good and doesn't miss a beat, you didn't ...

Hiya, RokitaVivi here! I'm reviewing using the YWS S'more Method today! Let's get this review started!!! So let's cook some delicious smores! Top Graham Cracker - What I Know This ...

Hiya! Before I get to the review, I just want to say right off the bat. This poem feels like a middle finger, but in a good way. Like the ...

For a first story, it's pretty good:). There were times where the short reads almost like a poem. Your description of what the character is going through was excellent... or ...

First off, happy (late) birthday and I hope life brings you good fortunes. Second, your poem's pretty good and letting out your feelings out on full display. I find your ...

Alright, time for a good old fashion review :D Your atmosphere is just oozing in the dark and macabre vibes, almost gothic especially with the use of crows or related ...

The poem was pretty good, I'll give you a thumbs up on that. Your use of words has a lot of emotion behind it and you say these words with ...

Review time! I was surprised how quickly that escalated from Keith going on a photography adventure in potentially dangerous factory to getting green slime of unknown origin on his skin ...

I have to say, this is story is gonna be interesting. The cover art by Ari11 looks good, not to mention colorful too. Keith sounds like a fun character and ...

Just a quick little review of this fine little poem. This poem is very fitting for the Young Writers Society and it show in spades. Then you sprinkled in some ...

Before I start the review I have to say, your poem was very beautiful and I liked it very much. The poem was consistent from beginning to end. I love ...

I just want to get it out of the way, but this is a good story and an interesting one at that. You can't help but feel a bit sad ...

That was amazing, hats off to you! The recording is really great listened to it and shed a tear, I can feel it in your voice. The overall poetry is ...

Your poem was fantastic from beginning to end, it makes me want to read it again. When I read the poem aloud, it flows very smoothly and a nice rhythm ...