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The Twelve Days of YWS Christmas

by SantaYWS


On the first day of Christmas, my true love sent to me:
A Goose in a Cleared Green Room.


On the second day of Christmas, my true love sent to me:
Two Book Recs, and a Goose in a Cleared Green
Room!


On the third day of Christmas, my true love sent to me:
Three Followers, Two Book Recs, and a Goose
in a Cleared Green Room!


On the fourth day of Christmas, my true love sent to me:
Four Rick-Rolls, Three Followers, Two Book
Recs, and a Goose in a Cleared Green Room!


On the fifth day of Christmas, my true love sent to me:
Five of Snoink’s Pigs, Four Rick-Rolls, Three
Followers, Two Book Recs, and a Goose in a Cleared Green Room!


On the sixth day of Christmas, my true love sent to me:
Six Random Likes, Five of Snoink’s Pigs, Four
Rick-Rolls, Three Followers, Two Book Recs, and a Goose in a Cleared Green Room!


On the seventh day of Christmas, my true love sent to me:
Seven Spam Notifs, Six Random Likes, Five of
Snoink’s Pigs, Four Rick-Rolls, Three Followers, Two Book Recs, and a Goose in
a Cleared Green Room!


On the eighth day of Christmas, my true love sent to me:
Eight Writing-Jams, Seven Spam Notifs, Six Random
Likes, Five of Snoink’s Pigs, Four Rick-Rolls, Three Followers, Two Book Recs,
and a Goose in a Cleared Green Room!


On the ninth day of Christmas, my true love sent to me:
Nine New Reviews, Eight Writing-Jams, Seven
Spam Notifs, Six Random Likes, Five of Snoink’s Pigs, Four Rick-Rolls, Three
Followers, Two Book Recs, and a Goose in a Cleared Green Room!


On the tenth day of Christmas, my true love sent to me:
Ten Friendship Poems, Nine New Reviews, Eight
Writing-Jams, Seven Spam Notifs, Six Random Likes, Five of Snoink’s Pigs, Four
Rick-Rolls, Three Followers, Two Book Recs, and a Goose in a Cleared Green Room!


On the eleventh day of Christmas, my true love sent to me:
Eleven Author Memes, Ten Friendship Poems, Nine
New Reviews, Eight Writing-Jams, Seven Spam Notifs, Six Random Likes, Five of
Snoink’s Pigs, Four Rick-Rolls, Three Followers, Two Book Recs, and a Goose in
a Cleared Green Room!


On the twelfth day of Christmas, my true love sent to me:
Twelve Wall Shout-outs, Eleven Author Memes, Ten
Friendship Poems, Nine New Reviews, Eight Writing-Jams, Seven Spam Notifs, Six Random
Likes, Five of Snoink’s Pigs, Four Rick-Rolls, Three Followers, Two Book Recs,
and a Goose in a Cleared Green Room!


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Stickied -- Mon Jul 24, 2023 8:44 pm
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SantaYWS says...



This song is after the song, "The Twelve Days of Christmas" I wrote a YWS version inspired by @Areida's work: The Twelve Days of Christmas - YWS Version which uses the same concept.

I hope you enjoy!




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Mon Sep 04, 2023 8:08 pm
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AmayaStatham wrote a review...



Salutations, curious mind!



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Rinisha here, ready to dive into the pages of this intriguing story. 📚!

Buckle up, 'cause we're diving into my review magic! ✨

The Good Stuff:

First of all, let's talk about the parts that really rocked!

I think this is some very nice lyrics you have come up with. I love the concept and the fact that you made it a YWS version is cute. The elements of YWS such as the green room and the Golden Goose add some more depth to the lyrics. Ku2 2u! I’ve never ever thought that something like this was possible.

Nailed It!💐

This is probably my favourite couplet out of all the others, because it has nine in it. I’m a fan of nine and I like the “reviews” there. Amazing!

On the ninth day of Christmas, my true love sent to me:
Nine New Reviews, Eight Writing-Jams, Seven
Spam Notifs, Six Random Likes, Five of Snoink’s Pigs, Four Rick-Rolls, Three
Followers, Two Book Recs, and a Goose in a Cleared Green Room!


Overall Feelings:

I feel like you have a lot of experience with these lyrics and you are creative. I love the idea, the content and your different elements. You really made my day with this song. Now lasts the only question, when is the song coming out?

Have a nice day or night further! Keep writing! You are amazing!

Amazingly yours,
Rinisha
– Be yourself and keep writing! 📖🎉




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Tue Jul 25, 2023 11:25 pm
RokitaVivi wrote a review...



Just a quick little review of this fine little poem. This poem is very fitting for the Young Writers Society and it show in spades. Then you sprinkled in some humor within the lyrics, I could easily imagine a whole choir singing this song. Overall this poem is wonderful all around and fitting for the July Holidays. Goodnight, good morning, and good afternoon. This is Rokita_Vivi signing out.




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Tue Jul 25, 2023 1:39 am
LuminescentAnt wrote a review...



Hi, I’m here to write a super quick review for these lyrics!
The lyrics are really relatable and funny because they’re all true! I actually prefer this one to the previous one because the first one was filled with names, so one would only understand if they knew them, and was therefore outdated. But in comparison, these lyrics cannot be outdated and are mostly not user-centered. Overall, very funny lyrics!
Happy July holidays!

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Mon Jul 24, 2023 9:19 pm
GengarIsBestBoy wrote a review...



Howdy hey, Santa, Gengar here to leave a (quick) review!

I like this poem because of the familiar structure. Everyone knows the typical “12 Days of Christmas” song, and I like how the lines are YWS themed!

I think this begs the question, though: who is your true love? ;)

Overall, great poem, keep up the good work!

—GengarIsBestBoy





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