Young Writers Society

Before I start the review I have to say, your poem was very beautiful and I liked it very much. The poem was consistent from beginning to end. I love how you use imagery in it, describing seasons and each having different shapes. Not to mention how you use first stanza (verse 3-6) and the repetition throughout the poem. Like:
"the shapes of tears and quiet, questing whispers
of ancient trees and cold mountains old;
pain unseen whispers and mourns
the echo after the storm"
Although not word for word in each stanza it gets the meaning across. As far as criticism goes, I don't have any words for it. If I had to scrape the bottom of the barrel and feel free the overlook it, the start of each verse isn't capitalized.
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Top Graham Cracker - What I Know
The seasons are a beautiful topic to touch upon in any sort of literature. You start with winter, which is interesting since many people like to start with spring then end at winter. The entire poem follows the same structure with only changes in seasons and their descriptions. The changes are slight but significant, showing how the seasons are all in tandem with each other and need each other and are alike despite their differences.

Slightly Burnt Marshamallow - Room for Improvements
This is also unlike most poems I've seen as you barely changed most of the poem. As far as I observe, you followed this pattern and only substituted other fitting words.

_____ breathes, ____ the ______
in the shapes of ___ and ___,
the shape of _______ and quiet, questing whispers
of ancient trees and cold mountains old;
pain unseen whispers and mourns
the echo after the storm

Howdy hey! Gengar here to leave a review!

My interpretation:

This poem is about the four seasons and the emotions they represent. Winter is a time of pain and suffering; summer is a time of relaxation; spring is a time of laughter; fall is a time where everything is dying

I really liked the repetition and structure of the poem, it really ties everything. Additionally, I think you have a really strong imagery here!

Keep up the good work!
—GengarIsBestBoy