River

Please do seek proffessional help. But in regards to your writing congradulations. You constructed a story and made it very dark, ominous, gruesome, and somehow beautiful. It reminds me of ...

Hello Alliyah :) First off, this poem is great, the best I've read of your's so far (which is only two, but whatever). If I recall correctly, your last poem ...

I think a little more formality is in line in order for this letter to go the president. However, I do not agree wih Master_Yoda's complaints that the letter is ...

Good night. I will be your reviewer for this evening. Let me start by saying that I appreciate you writing about something like sand dunes becuase no one else seems ...

Spelling errors would be the first problem. But other than that the poem was really good. I really liked the part where you said "SCHEEEEEEECH !!!! My mind screams As ...

Hmmmmm.....Well what you have so far is good. It's a fast start and that can be tricky because eventualyy you will have to slow the story down and that is ...

This is a poem that explores, states more questions than answers. I love that. It also shares a story and focuses an event that most would overlook. I know I've ...

I prefer to start with the negative and work my way up. The negative is that your lack of grammar distracts the reader from the poem itself. I know that ...

Since I am the first person to review your peice, please take my adivce into careful consideration. I loved the first two paragraphs of the novel. I found myself lost ...

I like this poem alot. Its very visual, poetic. I feel like it captures the soul of our generation in a way and how we approach culture, love, and sex. ...

Alright, your story is good, very good. I liked the feel of it but at times i felt the speech was a bit robotic and you seemed to be listing ...

A perfect perception of the horrors or rape. I have met many people who have been violated and they go through so much. I like the reference to Charles Dicken's ...

A subject dealt with by all people at one point, it was well written and origional for what it was.Although I kind of felt that you wern't sure how you ...