RituparnaBhowmik

I like your style of strong hints and compact work. the tea here is simply tea but it isn't. its really awesome... I liked the phrase "Imaginary jazz" but i ...

this poem is wonderful, it reminds me of medieval duels, there are few nitpicks yet i would like to point some out- first of all the context is not clear. ...

the poem is really funny and a true reflection of a teenage day without internet. i liked the way that you kept it simple and smooth. but there are some ...

this poem was really sweet and cute, and i guess you really love your tomato. i would however like to point out some flaws[ pardon me if i am being ...

The poem is truly touching, and the emotions are well expressed. i like your compact style. but for the nitpick- first of all "Drips of red flowing down my arms," ...

I loved your poem, i really liked the use of lyric and the story you told through it. this poem is bringing forward an universal fact which is quite hard ...

this poem is the true reflection of how selfish we are, i taste a tough of Shakespeare in word thought that we gain pleasure at others sorrow. the poem is ...

This is quite interesting to write such a long review for this work.well the expressions throw a vivid imagery. it is certainly something i had never come across till date. ...

a real fun to read poem. a perfect satire. I love the use of quote in poem but i think its a little too much here, just reduce it a ...

this is a really great poem i must admit. its the perfect reflection of what we want and how confused and unrealistic our thoughts might get. if i were to ...

the poem was really beautiful and reminded me of my nursery drawing where i introduced as many colors as i could in a rainbow. i like the choice of words ...

I like the theme of your poem very much and also the style is quite interesting, if i were to nitpick i would just suggest few points, when one begins ...

I really like your concept and the change in mood as i read. but there was something that prevented me to connect all the stanza's in a single work first ...

the poem is good and simple, it begun like a simple teen imagination but at the end it was real mature. if i were to nitpick i would comment in ...

the poem is too deep, it is probably a perfect example of how to write brief and smart. it throws a vivid imagery and one almost catches ones breadth at ...