RippleGylf

Hello! Ripple again. This piece has a fairly unique format, so I am not completely sure what type of piece you were intending to write. You intentionally contradict yourself often, ...

Hello! Ripple here. I really don't know what to say about this work. From one point of view, based on the description, I think that this could be a satirical ...

Hello! Ripple here. :D This is a rather concise poem, but it gets the point across well. While I really like the simile you make here, I just wish that ...

Hello! Ripple here. I've only listened to a bit of the Night Vale stuff, (which I rather enjoyed, namely 'A Story About You,' I think. I'm not sure if that's ...

Hello! Ripple here. Hopefully you're having a fantastic RevMo. :D I really relate to the overall emotion of this poem. I've definitely been there, in that state of mind, and ...

Hello! Ripple here. This will actually be my first RevMo review, so I'm pretty excited. :D Just a short disclaimer: I have not read any of the rest of this ...

Hello! Ripple here on this marvelous Review Day. So, this is one of the more humorous poems I've seen on here, and it was a pleasure to read. :D I ...

Hello! Ripple here on this lethargic Review Day. (At least, I'm feeling lethargic...) This a very interesting and unique poem. Like Poopsie said, it feels rather disjunctive, but that's not ...

Hello! Ripple here on this outstanding Review Day. So, I really would have liked to read the prologue and critique it, but it seems to have vanished. Regardless, you asked ...

Hello! Ripple here on this exciting Review Day. I really love this poem. The physics nerd in me squees at scientific terms being used in poetry, and this is no ...

Hello! Ripple here on this exhilarating Review Day. I can definitely relate to a lot of the points you make here. Being self-contradictory is a daily battle. You absolutely nail ...

Hello! Ripple here on this awesome Review Day! First of all, I'm not sure about YWS's plagiarism policy. I think translations are OK, buy I'm not certain. Regardless, I don't ...

Hello! Ripple here on this marvelous Review Day. I really like the overall feel of this poem. The message is fairly solid, and it just reads very flowingly. My nitpicks ...

Hello! Ripple here on this sweet Review Day. I can definitely relate to the message you convey here. You have assuredly hit the nail on the head here. The parallels ...

Hello! Ripple here on this majestic Review Day. Overall, I think that, while your dialogue isn't terrible by any means, there needs to be more context for the situation at ...