Riedawriter23

I really like the big words you used but on the other hand they sort of ended in the destruction of the poem. I'm not sure if this is about ...

I liked this. Some how it seems like it could use a bit more though. Some lines were longer where they should have been shorter and you turned the rhyming ...

I didn't like how you continued the survivor parts. I didn't really get what was really happening until the end of the poem and that was only because I read ...

Wow. great detail. I loved every bit of it. I however liked how you gave your characters no names and how it was like we were in the mind of ...

This was great. It had the passion of a strong poem, aka, your others. It had the history of a thinking poem with mystery as well, and it had a ...

Whoa. Okay from the title I really wasn't expecting this, and since this is only the second poem I've read of yours I was REALLY shocked...but then again, after I've ...

That was wicked awesome. I finally here the title of your story being put into play and it isn't even what I would have guessed. The way you described it ...

I loved this as well. It was Amazing. I was a little concerned and surprised at Danielle's behavior... either that or your going to work it into your story which ...

WOW! I loved this, I think this was your best one so far! It was dramatic everywhere, I didn't see this coming at all and I'm wondering if it will ...

This was great. I liked the reactions of the people and how you described each. You're putting John and Kyle in an awkward situation almost everytime, almost like a non-spoken ...

YAY! I've been waiting for this one and it was definitley worth waiting for it. I loved how you ended it as well. Kyle and John are getting pretty close, ...

I really enjoyed this one as well. I also have a boy named Damon in my novel and he's quite the idiot. hehe. Anyway____ “Look, Damon.” Kyle stared into his ...

This was really good! I like all of it. “Is that—is that music?” She got up and walked into the living room. She turned to face Kyle and smiled. “And ...

I liked this one as well. Again, and I know you'll get tired of hearing this, I love how you end your posts. I swear I can't stop reading because ...

This was wonderful. There's that thing with Kyle and Sarah and that thing with Kyle and Jon and that thing with Kyle and______everyone else! I think you're putting the story ...