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Renard

You're beauty isn't registering on my scale because I don't have x-ray vision

  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Full Lives

    Hello. Well when I first saw this I thought I was going to read prose: so the poetry was a nice surprise. :) Now, I am taking the review of ...

    Jun 26, 2014
  • Short Story » General, Horror Re: Rescuing Teddy

    Hello. So this work is really creepy. I would categorize it in the horror genre I think, based on the ending: “It’s alright,” his father repeated. “Daddy’s here now. Let’s ...

    Jun 26, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, Humor Re: My Feet Stink

    Ha ha! Try foot deodorant. LOL. This is just another really funny poem that i can't really criticise. This is my favourite part: My podiatrist died, and I almost cried, ...

    Jun 26, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, Dramatic Re: The Demon of Sludge

    Hello. I remember reading this, but it turned out I never got round to reviewing it. I'm glad I did, because I am excited about trying to interpret this. His ...

    Jun 26, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, Humor Re: The Grease of Nuttingworth's Brow

    Hello. This is a really interesting work. Quite unusual. The shortness definitely makes it feel like an old folk tale: There was a man named Nuttingworth, Good name choice, very ...

    Jun 26, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, Humor Re: Tittie Traitor

    Ok. So this work has already been thoroughly reviewed, which makes it difficult for me to find something new to say. Also, I would hate to try and review this ...

    Jun 26, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: "See"

    Hello. This is a very "visual" work. LOL. I like what you have done with the formatting and I wouldn't have picked on it anyway. I think it's quite creative. ...

    Jun 26, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, Humor Re: True Love

    Hello. I get the feeling that your works are deliberately random. I don't know why, but I just feel like that's your style. I lean in close to taste your ...

    Jun 26, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Memory

    Hello. I really, really like your opening line: Etching life into a keyboard, I can't even explain why. As for the rest of the work: And Death, of course, will ...

    Jun 26, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Spiritual Re: Last sin

    Hello. Oooh, this is a very morally controversial work. You're dealing with a big issue: Death smelled her blood, it was Her turn, No more regrets and no return, Up ...

    Jun 26, 2014
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Horror Re: It Is Easier This Way

    Hello. Well I'm glad you have included the language warning you did! LOL. XD Err, I'm not sure that amount of foul language was really necessary? But I guess it ...

    Jun 26, 2014
  • Short Story » Romantic, Dramatic Re: My Sunshine

    Hello. This is hope. Hope in words. With lots of dialogue and description around it, and I like that. My main criticism of this is: I finally get up and ...

    Jun 26, 2014
  • Other » Dramatic, Fantasy Re: Patiently Waiting

    Hmm. I never how to interpret works like this. And it's ironic that the shortest work inspires one of the longest reviews - because there are so many things you ...

    Jun 26, 2014
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Dinner downstairs / Lunch

    LOL. This is the sort of feeling I get when I am running out of time to get writing done and you have captured it perfectly. my breath cold in ...

    Jun 26, 2014
  • Poetry » Fanfiction, General Re: A tree

    Hello. This is a really simple but effective work. And it's been cleverly organised because it actually looks like a tree! I don't know whether that was intentional or not. ...

    Jun 26, 2014


The beginning of wisdom is to call things by their right names.
— Chinese proverb