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Re: Full Lives
Hello. Well when I first saw this I thought I was going to read prose: so the poetry was a nice surprise. :) Now, I am taking the review of ...
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Re: Rescuing Teddy
Hello. So this work is really creepy. I would categorize it in the horror genre I think, based on the ending: “It’s alright,” his father repeated. “Daddy’s here now. Let’s ...
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Re: My Feet Stink
Ha ha! Try foot deodorant. LOL. This is just another really funny poem that i can't really criticise. This is my favourite part: My podiatrist died, and I almost cried, ...
Jun 26, 2014 -
Re: The Demon of Sludge
Hello. I remember reading this, but it turned out I never got round to reviewing it. I'm glad I did, because I am excited about trying to interpret this. His ...
Jun 26, 2014 -
Re: The Grease of Nuttingworth's Brow
Hello. This is a really interesting work. Quite unusual. The shortness definitely makes it feel like an old folk tale: There was a man named Nuttingworth, Good name choice, very ...
Jun 26, 2014 -
Re: Tittie Traitor
Ok. So this work has already been thoroughly reviewed, which makes it difficult for me to find something new to say. Also, I would hate to try and review this ...
Jun 26, 2014 -
Re: "See"
Hello. This is a very "visual" work. LOL. I like what you have done with the formatting and I wouldn't have picked on it anyway. I think it's quite creative. ...
Jun 26, 2014 -
Re: True Love
Hello. I get the feeling that your works are deliberately random. I don't know why, but I just feel like that's your style. I lean in close to taste your ...
Jun 26, 2014 -
Re: Memory
Hello. I really, really like your opening line: Etching life into a keyboard, I can't even explain why. As for the rest of the work: And Death, of course, will ...
Jun 26, 2014 -
Re: Last sin
Hello. Oooh, this is a very morally controversial work. You're dealing with a big issue: Death smelled her blood, it was Her turn, No more regrets and no return, Up ...
Jun 26, 2014 -
Re: It Is Easier This Way
Hello. Well I'm glad you have included the language warning you did! LOL. XD Err, I'm not sure that amount of foul language was really necessary? But I guess it ...
Jun 26, 2014 -
Re: My Sunshine
Hello. This is hope. Hope in words. With lots of dialogue and description around it, and I like that. My main criticism of this is: I finally get up and ...
Jun 26, 2014 -
Re: Patiently Waiting
Hmm. I never how to interpret works like this. And it's ironic that the shortest work inspires one of the longest reviews - because there are so many things you ...
Jun 26, 2014 -
Re: Dinner downstairs / Lunch
LOL. This is the sort of feeling I get when I am running out of time to get writing done and you have captured it perfectly. my breath cold in ...
Jun 26, 2014 -
Re: A tree
Hello. This is a really simple but effective work. And it's been cleverly organised because it actually looks like a tree! I don't know whether that was intentional or not. ...
Jun 26, 2014
