And so you left me here patiently waiting for the moment I have always dreamed of.
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Hmm.
I never how to interpret works like this.
And it's ironic that the shortest work inspires one of the longest reviews - because there are so many things you haven't said there is a lot to say about it.
I am very intrigued by what "moment" you could be referring to here. It's clever because it could be literally anything and apply to everyone! So well done.
What inspired you to write this?
And what are you patiently waiting for?
Hmm. So many questions. And as of now they are all left unanswered.
Kudos.
~R
I love this sentence! It so versatile and it strikes you. Being a romantic, it made my heart flutter, it is super sweet and has a mysterious edge to it. I would love to see what you do with it; whether you write a story based off of it or even a poem. The only thing I would correct is maybe put a comma in between 'patiently' and 'waiting' but other than that it was great. Like I said can't wait to see what you do with it and what else you write.
Keep up the great writing!
-Roxie Rain
I think this would be a nice beginning (or end) for a novel. I like it, it's mysterious, dramatic, and Fantasy. I'm not sure if capitalization is very important in this, but you had some minor errors in that gild. Otherwise, I like it! Maybe you could post something on my wall when you publish something else? Look forward to seeing more!
Thanks so much for the feedback! I cant wait to read some of your work.