Brilliant :')
I am haunted each day by the smell,
Of perspiring pods, that below me, do dwell.
They exude such a stench,
and, good lord, I can't quench,
Those malodorous monsters from hell!
My socks turn to liquid; my shoes melt away.
My friends have seizures; my carpets, they fray.
My podiatrist died,
and I almost cried,
But I think I like him better this way.
HAHA! It's hilarious! But, just curious, what is a podiatrist?
My fav. line is " My friends have seizures; my carpets, they fray". It just seems really funny to me............:p
And the last line....aw, that's cruel! (but funny)
Overall, good usage of vocabulary and expressions! I really love limericks. Another humourous form of poetry is an epigram, though it's a bit tricky to write.
Keep up the good work!
Mysticalxx
Ha ha!
Try foot deodorant. LOL.
This is just another really funny poem that i can't really criticise.
This is my favourite part:
My podiatrist died,
and I almost cried,
this poem made me smile, and here's why. my brother and i joke about his feet all the time because they seem to destroy footwear, and reading this poem i was thinking of him from start to finish.
the humor is sort of childish, but i like it that way. the way you describe how awful your feet are is like you're describing a battle taking place. stuff's melting, people are dying and crying, all because of feet. i think the exaggeration really sells this poem.
i enjoyed the read.
Hey 
this won't be a huge review, because I actually love this poem.
The sense of humour is ridiculous and childish in the best way possible and the poem as a whole is kind of adorable, if not a little gross.
My favourite part is the fact that its so over dramatic.
"My friends have seizures; my carpets, they fray."
I have the same problem, haha, and you captured it hilariously.
Your vocabulary is beautifully created for a poem about feet.
Keep writing xx
Hi there, just a quick review on your poem
Firstly, I love how you came up with the idea. Even reading them is enough to spark the sense of humor in the poem. I like the end rhyme and I absolutely love the first stanza. Just one thing that makes me a bit unsatisfied is I'd expect more from the title. But then, it just simply tell the reader the 'description and feelings' of the writer about her stinky feet instead of bringing something uniqueness value through the good idea.
My podiatrist died,
and I almost cried,
But I think I like him better this way.
Hi, MargoSuess, and welcomeeeeee to YWS! *throws confetti* Ahem.
Wow, I seriously loved this. The randomness and humor was amazing. I liked how you stinky feet just so happened to inspire you to write a poem. And it ends up being funny (what poem about stinky feet wouldn't?)
The major thing I want to gush about is your beautiful vocabulary. I've never had great vocabulary (even for my age) and this, gosh, just makes me jealous even though you're way older than me.
My friends have seizures; my carpets, they fray.
I really like the use of the semi colon, and it really doesn't disturb the flow, in fact the flow is great. 
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