Renard

Ok... so this piece is a little unusual, in the sense, that your writing is composed of a very unconventional style. This isn't necessarily a bad thing, but it makes ...

First of all, I love the title. It really sets the reader thinking. Um... my first criticism of this as a piece, however, is that for a 'short' work, it ...

I think you've come up with a really interesting concept here. The characters are really developed and the use of 'Ma' works insanely well actually. There is certainly a comment ...

Ok... here is my review as commissioned. This is incredible! Very professional, your ideas and points are organised clearly and separately. Spelling, punctuation and grammar is accurate. The content h

This is the most amazing thing I have ever read! I love the way you let the reader interpret the meaning for themselves. It's literally a blank canvas and it ...

Okay. I like the piece... I especially commend your use of proper English this time. I must admit, after reading the previous pieces I was looking for typos. I read ...

'All I want is pleasure' ;) Okay, I'm goning to be harsh now dude.... READ YOUR WORK BACK!!!! Amateur error. Does not look good. Especially when you have the nerve ...

'You think I'm that Sheldon guy too' The Big Bang Theory? Seriously? XD You're right... 'Kinky-but why?' I don't actually know?! LOL I don't feel very relaxed by jazz music ...

Call me dirty minded... but: After We love Then that's my time to come (to come) XD You should put more sex into your work. :) Kind of reminds me ...

I am taking this as a blurb, or a pitch for your potential novel? Did you ever do anything with this? Because it is a really strong premise about a ...

So... feeling detached. There is a recurring theme of isolation in your works that makes for very lonely reading. LOL The language used here is very ambiguous and provocative to ...

On the basis that there is a potential Nirvana reference here: 'In utero...' I promise not to fault this piece. ;) Now... onto the artistry. I am impressed that you ...

F@ck me. This is like the longest piece I have read on here ever. I haven't seen many scripts and I certainly didn't expect one from you. LOL I know ...

Well... I remember this. And I love the fact it is so topical. You have really tapped into something here. I like that. Favourite line: 'That life isn't about violence, ...

Awww... this piece is really sad. The fact it is short makes the impact stronger as well, I think. So I like that. The end line is also very in ...