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Okay. I like the piece... I especially commend your use of proper English this time. I must admit, after reading the previous pieces I was looking for typos.
I read 'flirted' as 'farted' the first time actually... but corrected myself before lecturing you. So... I'm guessing this one is all about giving and getting nothing back.
Can definitely relate to that. Good choice of theme.
~Bloodink
I think it is really good...
kinda makes me think of how it was like with me and my friend..... i am a little confused why it is called Mindless Behavior though...
I want to read some of the others because i am interested in what they are about so i shall do that now
Keep Writing