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Renard

You're beauty isn't registering on my scale because I don't have x-ray vision

  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Dear You.

    Hello. So this is a very ambiguous work, in the sense that whoever "You" is supposed to be in this sense, they clearly aren't that liked by the person who ...

    Jul 1, 2014
  • Lyrics » Politics, Other Re: Wake Up And Smell The Coffee

    Hello. So this is where you start to get politically motivated and talking about more "serious issues" compared to the romantic ones. And that's ok. The narrator of this work ...

    Jul 1, 2014
  • Lyrics » Realistic, Other Re: Paranoid Schizophrenic's Lullaby

    Hello hunny. The title of this is your dig, much much more. I can see that your "love" phase was exactly that. A phase. Hmm, maybe you could go back ...

    Jul 1, 2014
  • Lyrics » Romantic, Lyrical Re: Please Come See Me

    Hello. So you've set this one out just like a song. :) Ok, at least there isn't all the creepy format we've seen before. XD Please come see me. You ...

    Jul 1, 2014
  • Lyrics » Realistic, Humor Re: Aftermath

    Hello. Right, so I was hoping this wasn't going to be another pervy work. Then I read the first line. I am really surprised you were allowed to submit these ...

    Jul 1, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: WE WERE TOGETHER IN HARMONY

    Weird. Everything's bright. This opening sounds like an alien talking. XD Where is the darkness? Everyone's gone. Raining outdoors. Earning more respect. Morning respect? I like the ambience of this ...

    Jul 1, 2014
  • Lyrics » Romantic, General Re: Show & Tell

    Hello. So the concept of show and tell is not given here in the childish classroom sense of taking things in to explain them. I think this is written on ...

    Jul 1, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Kiss The Sky, Brenda

    Hello. Well that was short and not very sweet. XD To say the least. Firstly: LOL @ the name Brenda. Why? O.O Kiss the sky, Brenda The sky is falling ...

    Jul 1, 2014
  • Lyrics » Romantic, Humor Re: Megan

    Hello. So this basically looks like a "hate" work in the direction of this character: Megan. Poor girl. XD Her name is Megan. She is so jealous. For some odd ...

    Jul 1, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: Like Amanita

    Amanita. Just like your name. Lovely eyes. Trick on my brain. Hello! Yep, me back to review again. After the last one being quite confusing, I hope I can make ...

    Jul 1, 2014
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, Romantic Re: Kiss Kiss Kiss Tell Tell Tell

    Hello. XD The title of this is definitely distinctive of you, because of the incessant repetition, however, apart from that, the rest of it: SOUNDS NOTHING LIKE YOU, AS THE ...

    Jul 1, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Other Re: VERY short haiku

    Hello. Wow, so you had a whole "love" phase. WOW! XD I am really surprised by this, because you don't write like this anymore :/ I wish you did sometimes ...

    Jul 1, 2014
  • Lyrics » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Like Glue

    Hello. Well, alright. In essence this is a predictable metaphor; and not one I would have expected you to use However, having said that, reading these earlier works of yours ...

    Jul 1, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Romantic Re: Spring

    Heyo. It's probably about the first time I've read something of yours that isn't covered in blood or that isn't about war. XD And that makes a refreshing change, it's ...

    Jul 1, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Second Always Comes Last: Terminal

    Hello. You always open things with a very philosophical line: In life, some things tend to happen slowly, and others so fast it is hard to believe it ever happened ...

    Jul 1, 2014


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