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Re: Dear You.
Hello. So this is a very ambiguous work, in the sense that whoever "You" is supposed to be in this sense, they clearly aren't that liked by the person who ...
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Re: Wake Up And Smell The Coffee
Hello. So this is where you start to get politically motivated and talking about more "serious issues" compared to the romantic ones. And that's ok. The narrator of this work ...
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Re: Paranoid Schizophrenic's Lullaby
Hello hunny. The title of this is your dig, much much more. I can see that your "love" phase was exactly that. A phase. Hmm, maybe you could go back ...
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Re: Please Come See Me
Hello. So you've set this one out just like a song. :) Ok, at least there isn't all the creepy format we've seen before. XD Please come see me. You ...
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Re: Aftermath
Hello. Right, so I was hoping this wasn't going to be another pervy work. Then I read the first line. I am really surprised you were allowed to submit these ...
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Re: WE WERE TOGETHER IN HARMONY
Weird. Everything's bright. This opening sounds like an alien talking. XD Where is the darkness? Everyone's gone. Raining outdoors. Earning more respect. Morning respect? I like the ambience of this ...
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Re: Show & Tell
Hello. So the concept of show and tell is not given here in the childish classroom sense of taking things in to explain them. I think this is written on ...
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Re: Kiss The Sky, Brenda
Hello. Well that was short and not very sweet. XD To say the least. Firstly: LOL @ the name Brenda. Why? O.O Kiss the sky, Brenda The sky is falling ...
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Re: Megan
Hello. So this basically looks like a "hate" work in the direction of this character: Megan. Poor girl. XD Her name is Megan. She is so jealous. For some odd ...
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Re: Like Amanita
Amanita. Just like your name. Lovely eyes. Trick on my brain. Hello! Yep, me back to review again. After the last one being quite confusing, I hope I can make ...
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Re: Kiss Kiss Kiss Tell Tell Tell
Hello. XD The title of this is definitely distinctive of you, because of the incessant repetition, however, apart from that, the rest of it: SOUNDS NOTHING LIKE YOU, AS THE ...
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Re: VERY short haiku
Hello. Wow, so you had a whole "love" phase. WOW! XD I am really surprised by this, because you don't write like this anymore :/ I wish you did sometimes ...
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Re: Like Glue
Hello. Well, alright. In essence this is a predictable metaphor; and not one I would have expected you to use However, having said that, reading these earlier works of yours ...
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Re: Spring
Heyo. It's probably about the first time I've read something of yours that isn't covered in blood or that isn't about war. XD And that makes a refreshing change, it's ...
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Re: Second Always Comes Last: Terminal
Hello. You always open things with a very philosophical line: In life, some things tend to happen slowly, and others so fast it is hard to believe it ever happened ...
Jul 1, 2014
