Renard

WHOA! XD 'I smile coyly and lean over the small dining table watching Tim gape at my exposed breasts.' That was not what I was expecting. BUMP THIS WORK UP ...

Heggo again. XD This is a simple poem with a great structure and rhyme scheme. 'Sing me a melody to relieve it all Let all the high hopes fall.' Very ...

'I don’t think we ever forgot the world. The world just forgot us.' - There are some great lines in this piece and this is just an example of one ...

I love the voice in this work. However, I think the punctuation is a bit heavy and it disrupts the flow when reading. 'A pit, perhaps, for I echo,' I ...

The day I made everyone hate me, started in Art; when I felt the need, to release a fart. Well, what can I say? Sometimes the shortest works are the ...

LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL This is the funniest thing I have read. It reminds me of the works of @pengtingking. XD Lulz Just so funny. XD 'Swaggity swag, Swiggity swooty. You must be ...

Hey XD I don't know where to begin here. So... line by line XD Worm trails in black - this is really strong. Great start. Across a field of white ...

After the prestige of your last work, I had to read this one. XD So here we go... Lightly drop the silken sparks, - love the alliteration. Lost in a ...

Ooooooooooooooooh 'A giggling gaggle of tickle me Elmos, you're full of crap like a commercial, Logos, Ethos, and Pathos.' This is so unusual, but also highly intelligent. I < 3 ...

Hey. I really like the ideas behind this work. :) I am going to give a line by line analysis. Here we go... when we were kids we used to ...

Hey! XD I am going to go through this line by line. Here we go... Wingless flutters my soul, - it can be cool when poems open with such ambiguous ...

So this work is VERY philosophical. 'Did Curiosity kill the cat, and can we ever know?' I had an 'ah ha' Eureka moment when I was reading this. It clicked ...

Panic is the brother of procrastination, - ooooh, playing around with Greek mythology. Pain and Panic. Me likey. Beating on my brain like the drums of the tribe, - great ...

Oddly, this work seems strangely apt given your avvie. XD Lulz. 'laughing, uncontrollably! Like they have no respect for a monster' I think this actually makes a deep point. Not ...

He thought there was no rush in his life anymore. Then the last man on earth Heard a knock at his door. LOL Not really a horror story me thinks? ...