started in Art;
when I felt the need,
to release a fart.
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HAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHA!
Thumbs up! I'm still grinning like an idiot! 
Short, to the point, and HILARIOUS! That's what I like about this poem!
Just one thing: Instead of writing "STARTED in Art" you could write BEGAN. I just think that word would give a better impression.
Write more stuff like this! Ha! How do you THINK of such things? I would be embarassed.( Not that I'm making fun of you)
Mysticalxx
Hey, Strange! Here for a review on this quirky, hilarious piece of work
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Good points:
Very funny
Nice title
2nd and 4th line rhyme
Rhythm
Nitpicks:
The first and third line don't rhyme; not following the same pattern. if you could make those rhyme, the poem would be even better.
Perhaps make it into a limerick? It would be even more catchy, rhythmic, and presumably hilarious if you did so.
Second line: started in art. Perhaps change to WAS in art? Unless, of course, everyone began to hate you from that very day, but that wasn't very clear.
Otherwise, great! Nice job! Keep writing!!!
Overall review: 8/10
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This is so odd yet humorous and clever. I liked the fact that it's only 4 lines long but it was very effective and complete regardless of it's length. Your title is also very attention grabbing and sums up your poem nicely. I also like your rhyme scheme and structure. This is a short, sweet, humorous piece.
Oh my god, this is brilliant. You have a way with short poems and humor, because when you slam these two together you get something wicked like this poem over here that just lightened up my night.
Simple poems can be so much more effective than long poems when written correctly, and you have mastered that! And there is even a rhyme between art and fart. xD
Just pure humor genius!
The day I made everyone hate me,
started in Art;
when I felt the need,
to release a fart.
Well, what can I say?
Sometimes the shortest works are the best and this certainly cheered me up.
Just a little excerpt of observational humour and VOILA!
Literary genius. *giggles* we need more pieces like this for the light relief.
I love reading your works for this reason: they are so unpredictable and so unique.
Creative congratulations.
Sweet holy mother of god did I giggle up a storm when I read this.
I really had to get a hold of myself when I first read this. Everytime I did another chuckle would explode from me. Great job on your humour you are en expert on it!
The day i made everyone hate me: only the heading suggest what the whole piece really is. Started in Art: that you must have enjoyed the class pretty well and the topic on discussion.also,that you felt strongly in your mind that; ' when you felt the need' to make the whole class laugh or you were all tired about the lesson that you decided to disperse the Exhaustable class- by "release a Fart". Hahahahahahahaha! You are great.keep on making me laugh.
Hello StangeLove. I loved your last humorous poem that I read, so I'll review this!
You were very on point with grammar in this poem. I felt it might not being, seeing as this is intended to be humorous, I thought you may have just ignored grammar, but you didn't. So good.
I thought about this. Did you intended to say that you were in school, in art class, and that's when this started? I'm surprised about how you managed to work a setting into this poem.
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So overall, I liked your immature poem. It was a breath of fresh air on this review day!
-Hightop
Hahahahahhaha
that line. Love it.
When I read the first two lines, I thought that it was going to be something like everyone started hating you because you painted or drew something so horrible/bad/grotesque or meaningful that they started hating you. And I thought, wow powerful words for two lines, then I saw the rest and LOLed. So simply terribly terrible its good
Can you write more silly stuff? Yep? Please? Yep. Do it.
I think this poem would look nicer if you dropped those capital letters at the start of the line.
Also, I think that that semicolon should be a fullstop/period.... and then follow with When... but yeah, oh well.
Hi, I'm CrystalPony but most people call me Crystal or simply Pony, I'm reviewing your work now kay?
Wow, there isn't much to review, I don't hate you though and so what if someone farts? Anyway great poem but um... can you please make it longer? I mean no offense but this is so short I feel like you wrote nothing. Hey, at least it rhymes. No grammar or spelling checks by me so, good job! Um, wow I'm surprised you wrote this so short! Anyway, good work keep writing Doctor!
~Crystal... Pony
Hey CrystalPony. Thanks for the review
. This is a "feel good" poem.It's supposed to be short
HAHA. Nice. I don't really think that everyone would necessarily HATE you, maybe just frown upon you, but this was really funny. Only one technical error - - change the period to either a semicolon or a comma, such as
"....Started in Art, when I felt the need to release a fart."
Or
".....Started in Art; when I felt the need to release a fart."
Good Job, DrStrangeLove!!
It really made me laugh and I hope others read this and find the joy in it, which unfortunately came about because of your discomfort and embarrassment.
Sincerely,
Smanske15