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Re: Between the raindrops on my window
Remington38 here to reveiw your writing! Wow is the first thing I have to say, just wow. I absolutely loved this story and the first paragraph alone sucked me into ...
Jul 22, 2016 -
Re: Pain
Hello Remington38 here to reveiw your amazing poem! I loved this poem and found it beautiful and moving. It was motivational towards the end and very personal but at the ...
Jul 22, 2016 -
Re: Spilled
Hello Remington38 here for a reveiw! Over all I thought this was a very nice poem. It flowed very well and the imagery was fantastic. There were a lot of ...
Jul 22, 2016 -
Re: Pastel
Hello Remington38 here for a reveiw!!!!! The title of this caught my attention cause it stood out in such a unique way. I absolutely loved this poem and think that ...
Jul 22, 2016 -
Re: Anthill
Hello Remington38 here for a reveiw! It was short but I don't feel like it needs to be added onto. It has said what it needs to say and I ...
Jul 21, 2016 -
Re: Picture Frames
Hello Remington38 here for a reveiw! I would like to start off by saying welcome to YWS! I can tell already you will fit right in. Now onto this chilling ...
Jul 21, 2016 -
Re: Tears? Cries? DUH! plz not in public.
Hello Remington38 here for a reveiw! This is beyond relatable to me and pretty much describes me to a T. I shove emotions way down into a hole and cover ...
Jul 21, 2016 -
Re: Kit Kat Rap
Hello!!! I saw the title of this and honestly had to read it. This make me laugh so much. I admire your rhyming skills and loved how creatively it was ...
Jul 20, 2016 -
Re: Her
Hi! I agree with the reviewer below me that when I read the title I was expecting some deep and heartfelt but not as much as there is. I really ...
Jul 20, 2016 -
Re: Bright eyes. Chapter one
Hello Remington38 here, Hi I really enjoyed this. My question is have you ever read The Giver because this is very similar? If not I recommend highly. My only nitpick ...
Jul 12, 2016 -
Re: Booty Shorts
I know you said in an earlier message to cut these off but I am just now reading this for the first time and was apparently missing something huge. So ...
Jul 7, 2016 -
Re: Sorry, The Light Has Been Extinguished
Hello Remington38 here for a reveiw, This poem was absolutely amazing. I read one of your poems and could help myself to look at the long list of others you ...
Jun 27, 2016 -
Re: Free at Last
Hello Remington38 here! I really like the poem. It was short sweet and enjoyable. Though when I first read then title then first thing that popped into mhead was a ...
Jun 12, 2016 -
Re: ​Past Future
Remington38 here for a review! Wow. When I first read the title I was worried because time travel is very hard in my opinion to write or describe but I ...
Jun 7, 2016 -
Re: Reality
Remington38 here for a reveiw! I really enjoyed reading this and am glad somebody finally wrote on this topic. Wow this is filled with truths that needed to be pointed ...
Jun 7, 2016
